UNIV 104 English Assessment solutions complete answers

UNIV 104 English Assessment solutions complete answers 

 

In the essay, “Operating Room Housekeepers,” the author combines which modes of writing?

 

Consider the following sentence. Which revision uses the most appropriate tone?

Sentence: The scriptures are clear about marriage being holy in God’s sight; consequently, married couples must take their vows serious if the current trend in divorce, in and outside the church, is to change.

 

In the reading passage above, which of the following sentences would be considered the topic sentence?

 

The above essay uses which mode of writing?

 

In a revision of the 1st paragraph, which is preferable and provides all the information for combining the first two sentences?

 

Question 4: Multiple Choice According to the article, more money is spent in the Unites States each year on health care as on national defense.

Question 5: Multiple Choice Both Edna and me were asked to put aside our regular work so that we could help prepare the proposal for the new client.

Question 6: Multiple Choice Because the public-address system was not working proper, only the people who were sitting in the front of the auditorium could hear the speaker clearly.

Question 7: Multiple Choice 89 The validity of the results of any survey depend, in part, on the care with which the sample is chosen.

Question 8: Multiple Choice Among the nonfictional works of James Baldwin are two volumes of essays that explore the relationship between Black intellectuals with society.

 

Question 1: Multiple Choice Even after having prepared in the most thoroughest manner, Mark did not feel confident that his presentation would be successful.

Question 2: Multiple Choice Shoppers hunting for low prices will be able to find them at this sale; however, he or she should do some comparison shopping first in order to recognize the true bargains.

Question 3: Multiple Choice 88 In the days when baseball parks were small, with stands close to the playing fields, fans not only recognized individual players easily but also would be more knowledgeable about the game.

 

Question 9: Multiple Choice If the forest fire that broke out yesterday is not brought under control shortly, an entire village would have to be evacuated.

Question 10: Multiple Choice Because Maria had ran so fast during the first part of the race, she was beginning to tire by the time she reached the steep grade in the middle of the course.

Question 15: Multiple Choice Inez and Dave plan to apply for part-time jobs, but, although they both are full-time students, Inez wants to work longer hours than him.

Question 16: Multiple Choice Like an iceberg, the Portuguese man-of-war conceals its most longest and most dangerous parts beneath the surface of the sea.

Question 17: Multiple Choice Like an iceberg, the Portuguese man-of-war conceals its most longest and most dangerous parts beneath the surface of the sea.

Question 18: Multiple Choice Chief among the recommendations of the committee are that the students be encouraged to participate in Black History month by attending the special programs sponsored by the school.

 

Question 11: Multiple Choice After hearing Smith's surprising report, Detective Meng began to expect that the 90 witness had been lying.

Question 12: Multiple Choice As visitors enter the Museum of the Plains Indian, you see four large murals, painted by the Blackfoot artist Victor Pepion, that depict several aspects of the buffalo hunt.

Question 13: Multiple Choice When the traffic light was installed at the intersection of Broad Street and Washington Avenue, the flow of rush-hour traffic improves noticeably.

Question 14: Multiple Choice Rear Admiral Grace Hopper, who developed COBOL, one of the first computer languages, retiring after serving forty-three years in the United States Navy.

 

Question 19: Multiple Choice When the leaders of the American Revolution sought foreign help, they logically turned to France and Spain, and both countries responded favorable.

Question 20: Multiple Choice Elizabeth Gaskell's nineteenth-century novel North and South draws an extended contrast between the attractive southern countryside of Britain with the grimy factory towns of the north.

Question 21: Multiple Choice Because the bamboo plant on which the panda feeds is now scarce, naturalists are worried about their chances of survival.

Question 26: Multiple Choice Because they were confined to the cramped cockpit of the small experimental plane and the two pilots found the long flight extremely uncomfortable.

Question 27: Multiple Choice Sustained high temperatures can weaken tires, causing blowouts and tread separations.

Question 28: Multiple Choice Unfortunately, the already hard-pressed farmers were plagued once again by spring flooding, midsummer drought, and early frost.

Question 29: Multiple Choice If he would know about the seminar, Rafael would not have called the meeting of the Hispanic Students' Union for the same evening.

Question 30: Multiple Choice The room, which has been painted white, and it still looks small and gloomy.

Question 31: Multiple Choice The polarization of the Earth is not fixed; in fact, the north and south magnetic poles which have exchanged positions five times over the last two million years.

 

Question 22: Multiple Choice When we arrived in Montreal, we learned that a jazz festival had just began there.

Question 23: Multiple Choice Frank was very good at planning practical jokes; the joke he played on Alice and I was particularly clever.

Question 24: Multiple Answer Neither the scientist nor her research assistant expect to encounter any difficulty in obtaining funds for the project.

Question 25: Multiple Choice Deciding which one of the three plans for the library was the better one proved to be exceedingly difficult because each of the architects had presented excellent ideas.

 

Question 32: Multiple Answer It is easy to learn to use the personal computer, and it has replaced the typewriter in most homes and offices.

Question 33: Multiple Choice The contributions of minority groups to the culture of the United States are so extensive that no brief scholarly work cannot be expected to treat the subject satisfactorily.

Question 37: Multiple Choice Because of the water shortage, the governor encouraged consumers to conserve the available supply.

Question 38: Multiple Choice A failure as an administrator, the general made irrational decisions, he exceeded his authority, and alienating many of the best members of the staff.

Question 39: Multiple Choice Culture consists of all learned information and it is transmitted by generation to generation.

Question 40: Multiple Choice Martina Arroya, like Leontyne Price, are celebrated for opera singing.

 

Question 34: Multiple Choice Her first novel destroyed her quiet life, and the reason was she impressed the critics, the public was captivated, and she became a celebrity overnight.

Question 35: Multiple Choice As students who commute to campus, we feel that you should be excused from class when the weather makes it hazardous for us to drive.

Question 36: Multiple Choice Which of the two athletes is the better runner is difficult to say; both have abundant speed, energy, and endurance.

 

Question 1

 

 
 
 
Questions 2-11. Read each sentence and find the error in academic or formal English in each. There is no more than one error in each sentence. Remember that academic or formal English is the kind of English you are usually asked to write in class; sometimes there is a difference between the way we write something and the way we say the same thing. 

Answer True or False: I have read the above instructions. 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Question 4

 

 
 
 
Even after having prepared in the most thoroughest manner, Mark did not feel confident that his presentation would be successful.
 
 
 
  
Even after
 
most thoroughest
 
confident that
 
would be
 
 
 
Question 5

 

 
 
 
Frank was very good at planning practical jokes; the joke he played on Alice and I was particularlyclever.
 
 
 
  
at planning
 
he played
 
I
 
particularly
 
 
 
Question 6

 

Question 2 

 
 
 
Elizabeth Gaskell's nineteenth-century novel North and South draws an extended contrast between the attractive southern countryside of Britain with the grimy factory towns in the north.
 
 
 
  
draws
 
extended
 
with
 
in
 
 
 
Question 3

 

 
 
 
Because the bamboo plant on which the panda feeds is now scarce, naturalists are worried about theirchances of survival.
 
 
 
  
on which
 
is now scarce
 
about
 
their
 
 
 
 

 
 
 
Because the public-address system was not working proper, only the people who were sitting in the front of the auditorium could hear the speaker clearly.


 
 
 
  
was not working
 
proper
 
only
 
could hear
 
 
 
Question 7

 

 
 
 
Shoppers hunting for low prices will be able to find them at this sale; however, he or she should do some comparison shopping first in order to recognize the true bargains.
 
 
 
  
hunting for
 
he or she
 
first
 
in order to
 
 
 
Question 10

 

 
 
 
When the leaders of the American Revolution sought foreign help, they logically turned to France and Spain, and both countries responded favorable.
 
 
 
  
When
 
logically
 
turned to
 
favorable
 
 
 
Question 11

 

 
 
 
Rear Admiral Grace Hopper, who developed COBOL, one of the first computer languages, retiringafter serving forty-three years in the United States Navy.
 
 
 
  
who developed
 
one of
 
retiring
 
after
 
 
 
Question 12

  

Question 8

 

 
 
 
Both Edna and me were asked to put aside our regular work so that we could help prepare the proposalfor the new client.
 
 
 
  
me
 
put aside
 
so that
 
for
 
 
 
Question 9

 

 
 
 
Neither the scientist or her research assistant expect to encounter any difficulty in obtaining funds for the project.
 
 
 
  
Neither
 
or
 
to encounter
 
obtaining
 
 
 
 

 
 
 
Questions 13-18. Select the best version of the underlined part of the sentence. Choice (A) is the same as the original sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose answer (A).


Answer True or False: I have read the above instructions.
 
 
 
  
True
 
False
 
 
 
Question 13

 

 
 
 
Select the best wording of the underlined part of the sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose answer A.
 
If he would know about the seminar, Rafael would not have called the meeting of the Hispanic Students' Union for the same evening.
 
 
 
  
If he would know
 
Not knowing
 
Inasmuch as he did not know
 
If he had known
 
 
 
Question 16

 

 
 
 
Select the best wording of the underlined part of the sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose answer A.
 
Which of the two athletes is the better runner is difficult to say; both have abundant speed, energy, and endurance.
 
 
 
  
runner is difficult to say; both
 
runner, it is difficult to say; and both
 
runner is difficult to say, both
 
runner, being difficult to say because both
 
 
 
Question 17

 

 
 
 
Select the best wording of the underlined part of the sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose answer A.
 
The polarization of the Earth is not fixed; in fact, the north and south magnetic poles which have exchanged positions five times over the last two million years.
 
 
 
  
poles which have exchanged positions
 
poles have exchanged positions
 
poles, exchanging positions
 
poles, their positions exchanged
 
 
 
Question 18

 

Question 14

 

 
 
 
Select the best wording of the underlined part of the sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose answer A.
 
Culture consists of all learned information and it is transmitted by generation to generation.
 
 
 
  
and it is transmitted by
 
that is transmitted from
 
being transmitted by
 
that they have transmitted from
 
 
 
Question 15

 

 
 
 
Select the best wording of the underlined part of the sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose answer A.
 
The room, which has been painted white, and it still looks small and gloomy.
 
 
 
  
The room, which has been painted white, and
 
Painting the room white, after which
 
Even though the room has been painted white,
 
Despite the white paint for the room,
 
 
 
 

 
 
 
Select the best wording of the underlined part of the sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose answer A.
 
Unfortunately, the already hard-pressed farmers were plagued once again by spring flooding,midsummer drought, and early frost.
 
 
 
  
midsummer drought, and early frost
 
with midsummer drought, and the early frost
 
then there was midsummer drought and early frost
 
followed by midsummer drought and early frost after that
 
 
 
Question 20

 

 
 
 
In a free market economy, which of the protections would the government NOT offer?
 
 
 
  
Protecting personal property
 
Protecting individuals' trade interests abroad
 
Protecting against force
 
Protecting against fraud
 
 
 
Question 21

 

 
 
 
Which of these terms or ideas do you NOT need to understand ahead of time to be able to comprehend the meaning of this passage?
 
 
 
  
Government intervention
 
Supply and demand
 
Free market economics
 
Force and fraud
 
 
 
Question 23

 

 
 
 
What is the solution Paul gives in this passage to the problem he discusses?
 
 
 
  
He thinks the law should be abolished.
 
He trusts Jesus to deliver him.
 
He is waiting for death, when the battle will be over.
 
Whatever bad he does, he blames on the sin in him; therefore, he doesn't feel guilty anymore.
 
 
 
Question 24

 

 
 
 
Which of these terms best describes Paul's mental state as he portrays it here?
 
 
 
  
He is dealing with a lot of unresolved anger.
 
He feels very guilty about a sin he has committed recently.
 
He feels that he is divided against himself.
 
He is upset because he has low self-esteem.
 
 
 
Question 26

 

 
 
 
Which sentence uses specific and detailed vocabulary to convey the theme?
 
 
 
  
Just beyond the rocks is the desolate road which mocks my worries by providing the enemy a valued avenue of approach.
 
The hateful noise belongs to the cloaked black figures bowing in unison.
 
Finally, my chill is warmed by an orange sun falling slowly out of sight.
 
The foreboding city of Baghdad brings chills of fear that are only penetrated by its transcendent sunsets. 
 
 
 
Question 27

 

 
 
 
Identify the topic sentence of the paragraph:
 
 
 
  
It is then I realize, even in the valley of the shadow of death I find peace; the hand of God has painted a magnificent sunset just for me.
 
The brisk draft runs farther down my spine as I hear the eerie prayers shouted from rooftop to rooftop.
 
The foreboding city of Baghdad brings chills of fear that are only penetrated by its transcendent sunsets.
 
In the distance, beyond the menace, an exquisite array of colors pierces my doubts.
 
 
 
Question 29

 

 
 
 
What is the vantage point of the author in the passage?
 
 
 
  
On the ground
 
Standing behind a wall
 
On a rooftop above the city
 
In the barracks
 
 
 
Question 31

 Question 28

 

 
 
 
Rewrite the following sentence that removes the passive voice and adds clarity.

Sentence: Just beyond the rocks is the desolate road which mocks my worries by providing the enemy a valued avenue of approach.
 
 
 
  
The desolate road beyond the rocks worries me because it provides the enemy an advantage.
 
The rocks ahead, being able to hide behind, in the desolate road, mocks my fears and provides a place for them to hide.
 
The desolate road ahead, which mocks my worries, provides a hiding place behind rocks for my enemy.
 
The enemy can hide behind the rocks and I am afraid because the road is desolate and they have a better approach.
 
 
 
 

 
 
 
In the paragraph, which of the following best describes the concluding sentence? 

Sentence: In censorship, silence is not always golden, even secrets between friends can be a form of voluntary censorship, or not!
 
 
 
  
The concluding sentence is ineffective because it introduces a new detail or supporting point.
 
The concluding sentence is highly effective and no revision is needed.
 
The concluding sentence is ineffective because an exclamation mark is used.
 
The concluding sentence is ineffective because it restates the topic sentence.
 
 
 
Question 32

 

 
 
 
Which of the following sentences best defines “censorship” in connotative terms?
 
 
 
  
Rather, it [censorship] is the control of information showing itself in the form of a boycott, embargo, injunction, restriction, and last but not least, “silence.”
 
In censorship, silence is not always golden.
 
The word "censorship” means to silence, limit, or repress information.
 
Still another example, would be by taking the 5th Amendment, individuals can choose to remain silent because the information may only serve to incriminate them.
 
 
 
Question 33

 

 
 
 
In the passage, which of the following would be considered the topic sentence?
 
 
 
  
Others think it only comes through a dictatorship type of government.
 
Sometimes people confuse censorship with the thought of limiting it to only a couple of types or that censorship is always valid or deserving.
 
Still another example, would be by taking the 5th Amendment, individuals can choose to remain silent because the information may only serve to incriminate them.
 
In censorship, silence is not always golden.
 
 
 
Question 34

 

 
 
 
What mode of writing is primarily used in this passage?
 
 
 
 

  
Classification
 
Comparison
 
Descriptive
 
Definition
 
 
 
Question 36

 

 
 
 
The author chose six dresses for the fitting room, but she bought the first dress she tried on. What might the author’s purpose be in providing these details?
 
 
 
  
To explain the dress-fitting policies in bridal boutiques.
 
To prove how easy wedding dress shopping should be for all brides.
 
To describe the overwhelming task of dress shopping. 
 
To emphasize how quickly she found the perfect dress.
 
 
 
Question 37

 

 
 
 
In this passage, which of the following sentences would be considered the topic sentence?
 
 
 
  
The wedding process is often trying; however, during my wedding planning, the easiest and most essential aspect was choosing my gown.
 
Because department-sized wedding shops can be intimidating, I made an appointment at a small, bridal boutique.
 
It was evident that I had found the perfect gown for my wedding.
 
The preparation for a wedding can be difficult at times; yet, I found the perfect dress to ensure a key element of my wedding day.
 
 
 
Question 38

 

 
 
 
Which of the following details could the author have omitted because the information within the sentence is not relevant?
 
 
 
  
Because department-sized wedding shops can be intimidating, I made an appointment at a small, bridal boutique.
 
I was allowed to choose six gowns to take to the fitting room.
 
Yet, the first one I picked was similar to all the dresses I envied in the magazines.
 
All of the details are significant and should remain in the paragraph.
 
 
 
Question 39

 

 
 
 
What is the best way to revise this passive sentence to active voice from this passage? 

Sentence: I was allowed to choose six gowns to take to the fitting room.
 
 
 
  
I could choose six gowns to take with me into the fitting rooms.
 
I chose six gowns to take into the fitting room.
 
Into the fitting room, I was able to take six gowns.
 
At the store, I was allowed to choose six gowns to take to the fitting room.
 
 
 
Question 41

 

 
 
 
What would be considered the main idea of this passage?
 
 
 
  
Marriage causes changes in a person’s lifestyle.
 
Ministers live a transient lifestyle.
 
Marriage causes wives to be reclusive.
 
Worshipping at a different churches is a blessing.
 
 
 
Question 42

 

 
 
 
What specific verb does the author overuse within the paragraph?
 
 
 
  
Transition
 
Minister
 
Leaving
 
Spend
 
 
 
Question 43

 

 
 
 
Which of the sentences below signals an abrupt change in the mode of writing?
 
 
 
  
Once upon a time, I knew tens of thousands of people in all the churches we visited.
 
I packed in less than thirty minutes for a journey of a few weeks to a month.
 
I journeyed all over the United States and some in Canada and Mexico.
 
I found myself in church several days a week; ministering in each service to one degree or another.
 
 
 
Question 44

 

 
 
 
What specific sentence and word choice best describes the author’s feelings towards her current situation?
 
 
 
  
My life after marriage is a far cry from what it was before I married.
 
In my husband’s home church I am seldom asked to minister, yet I still receive calls from time to time asking me to minister in other churches.
 
My week usually consists of departing for church, which is situated across the street.
 
I do not like traveling alone so I seldom accept many offers to minister outside my home church.
 
 
 
Question 46

 

 
 
 
How could the author achieve credibility in this passage?
 
 
 
  
By addressing the audience using second person point of view
 
By using sources to support his/her main claims
 
By providing more details regarding the three classification of boats
 
By adding personal experiences
 
 
 
Question 47

 

 
 
 
Which mode of writing is used in this passage?
 
 
 
  
classification
 
comparison
 
definition
 
narrative
 
 
 
Question 48

 

 
 
 
Which phrase least effectively describes the final type of boat class?
 
 
 
  
Made for the big, open water
 
Withstanding much larger waves
 
Can carry more passengers
 
More maneuverable
 
 
 
Question 49

 

 
 
 
Which of the following phrases serves as an effective transitional phrase?
 
 
 
  
Most stream boats require
 
The next choice
 
Most inland boats
 
In most applications
 
 
 
Question 51

 

 
 
 
Which sentence best shows the transition in tone that takes place in this paragraph?
 
 
 
  
The competition between the two football teams brings everyone to the stadium for the game.
 
Many features combine to create the perfect football experience; these features include: the competition between the two teams, the fans, and the setting.
 
The chemistry created by the fierce athletes, driven to win, stirs up tension between the two groups of fans, who come ready to cheer on their team.
 
Warm hot chocolate, hot dogs, and nachos add to the overall football experience.
 
 
 
Question 52

 

 
 
 
Which of the following sentences is a strong transitional sentence from one supporting detail about the topic to the next?
 
 
 
  
The chemistry created by the fierce athletes, driven to win, stirs up tension between the two groups of fans, who come ready to cheer on their team.
 
Many features combine to create the perfect football experience; these features include: the competition between the two teams, the fans, and the setting.
 
The marching bands play different songs in the stands like “Hey, Baby” or “Go, Big Red!”
 
All of these elements, the competition, the fans, and the setting, combine to create the perfect, football experience.
 
 
 
Question 53

 

 
 
 
What is the topic sentence of this passage?
 
 
 
  
These two opposing and talented groups come prepared for the game, having practiced for weeks.  The chemistry created by the fierce athletes, driven to win, stirs up tension between the two groups of fans, who come ready to cheer on their team.
 
The competition between the two football teams brings everyone to the stadium for the game.
 
All of these elements, the competition, the fans, and the setting, combine to create the perfect, football experience.
 
Many features combine to create the perfect football experience; these features include: the competition between the two teams, the fans, and the setting. 
 
 
 
Question 54

 

 
 
 
Based on the topic sentence in the passage, what are the main points?
 
 
 
  
fierce athletes, competition, and setting
 
competition, setting, and fans
 
marching band, fierce athletes, and competition
 
teams, setting, and competition
 
 
 
Question 56

 

 
 
 
The following sentence from the essay “Operating Room Housekeepers” is confusing. Why?

Sentence: A housekeeper is also required to wear a mask, hat, and shoe covers before entering an operating room or center core area, this is not only to protect housekeepers from a patient that may have an infection, he or she may encounter while working in surgery; this also protects the patient, and helps protect the housekeeper from many other dangers he or she will encounter while cleaning in surgery.
 
 
 
  
Enjambment
 
Wordiness
 
Cliché
 
Time order words
 
 
 
Question 57

 

 
 
 
Consider the following sentence from “Operating Room Housekeepers”: Knowing what to do can help a housekeeper clean more efficiently and avoid any serious injuries while working in one of the most unique environments a housekeeper can work in. Which revision best eliminates vagueness/confusion?
 
 
 
  
A good housekeeper cleans more efficiently and avoids any serious injuries while working in one of the most unique environments a housekeeper can work in.
 
An operating room housekeeper, who is aware of potential hazards, will definitely clean more efficiently and more safely.
 
Knowing what to do can help a housekeeper clean more efficiently and avoid any serious injuries.
 
While working in one of the most unique environments a housekeeper can work in, knowing what to do can help a housekeeper clean more efficiently and avoid any serious injuries
 
 
 
Question 58

 

 
 
 
In the last paragraph of the essay, which is a better revision of the last sentence? 

Sentence: Knowing what to do can help a housekeeper clean more efficiently and avoid any serious injuries while working in one of the most unique environments a housekeeper can work in.
 
 
 
  
When a housekeeper knows what to do, they can clean more efficiently and avoid serious injury while working in the unique environment.
 
Knowing what to do can help a housekeeper clean more efficiently and avoid any serious injuries while working in one of the most unique environments.
 
Knowing what to do can help housekeepers clean more efficiently and avoid serious injuries while working in one of the most unique environments a housekeeper can work in.
 
A housekeeper, knowing what to do, can clean more efficiently and avoid any serious injuries while working in one of the most unique environments they can work in.
 
 
 
Question 60

 

 
 
 
What information is missing from the introduction that was needed for the establishment of a strong thesis and inclusive presentation of all of the information in the essay?
 
 
 
  
The protection that marriage offers
 
The covenant contract
 
The relationship aspect of the covenant
 
The sacredness of marriage
 
 
 
Question 61

 

 
 
 
Which of the following improves the second sentence in the last paragraph from a vague assertion to a more specific one? 

Sentence: Acknowledging this will greatly impact and reverse the current culture and views on marriage.
 
 
 
  
Acknowledging that marriage is serious will greatly impact and reverse the current culture and views on marriage.
 
Acknowledging this will greatly impact and reverse the current cultural views on marriage.
 
When people acknowledge that marriage is considered holy, it will reverse the current culture and views on marriage.
 
When people acknowledge the holiness and seriousness of marriage, their influence will reverse the current cultural views of marriage.
 
 
 
Question 62

 

 
 
 
Which sentence is a better transition for the beginning of paragraph 4?
 
 
 
  
The marriage covenant is the most important contract entered into by man.
 
The marriage covenant is best for relationships.
 
Because a covenant of committed relationships prevents disruption of marriage, it is the most important contract entered into by man.
 
Because the marriage covenant tends to prevent the disruption of relationships, it is the most important contract entered into by man.
 
 
 
 

 

 
 
 
Neither the scientist or her research assistant expect to encounter any difficulty in obtaining funds for the project.
 
 
 
  
Neither
 
or
 
to encounter
 
obtaining
 
 
 
Question 3

 

 
 
 
Like an iceberg, the Portuguese man-of-war conceals its most longest and most dangerous partsbeneath the surface of the sea.
 
 
 
  
Like an iceberg
 
its
 
most longest
 
beneath
 
 
 
Question 4

 

 
 
 
Rear Admiral Grace Hopper, who developed COBOL, one of the first computer languages, retiringafter serving forty-three years in the United States Navy.
 
 
 
  
who developed
 
one of
 
retiring
 
after
 
 
 
Question 7

 

 
 
 
When the traffic light was installed at the intersection of Broad Street and Washington Avenue, the flow of rush-hour traffic improves noticeably.
 
 
 
  
installed at
 
and
 
improves
 
noticeably
 
 
 
Question 8

 

 
 
 
Because the bamboo plant on which the panda feeds is now scarce, naturalists are worried about theirchances of survival.
 
 
 
  
on which
 
is now scarce
 
about
 
their
 
 
 
Question 9

 

 
 
 
When we arrived in Montreal, we learned that a jazz festival had just began there.
 
 
 
  
When
 
we arrived
 
learned
 
just began
 
 
 
Question 10

 

Question 5

 

 
 
 
As visitors enter the Museum of the Plains Indian, you see four large murals, painted by the Blackfoot artist Victor Pepion, that depict several aspects of the buffalo hunt.
 
 
 
  
As
 
you see
 
painted by
 
aspects of
 
 
 
Question 6

 

 
 
 
Deciding which one of the three plans for the library was the better one proved to be exceedinglydifficult because each of the architects had presented excellent ideas.
 
 
 
  
the better
 
proved to be
 
exceedingly
 
presented
 
 
 
 

 
 
 
Like a distance runner, the Dodge Challenger saves its most quickest and most impressive accelerationfor the open road.
 
 
 
  
Like a distance runner
 
its
 
most quickest
 
for
 
 
 
Question 11

 

 
 
 
Among the nonfictional works of James Baldwin are two volumes of essays that explore the relationship between black intellectuals with society.


 
 
 
  
Among
 
are
 
explore
 
with
 
 
 
Question 12

 

 
 
 
Questions 13-18. Select the best version of the underlined part of the sentence. Choice (A) is the same as the original sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose answer (A).


Answer True or False: I have read the above instructions.
 
 
 
  
True
 
False
 
 
 
 

 
 
 
Select the best wording of the underlined part of the sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose answer A.
 
If he would know about the seminar, Rafael would not have called the meeting of the Hispanic Students' Union for the same evening.
 
 
 
  
If he would know
 
Not knowing
 
Inasmuch as he did not know
 
If he had known
 
 
 
Question 16

 

 
 
 
Select the best wording of the underlined part of the sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose answer A.
 
Culture consists of all learned information and it is transmitted by generation to generation.
 
 
 
  
and it is transmitted by
 
that is transmitted from
 
being transmitted by
 
that they have transmitted from
 
 
 
Question 17

 

Question 13

 

 
 
 
Select the best wording of the underlined part of the sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose answer A.
 
Because of the water shortage, the governor encouraged consumers to conserve the available supply.
 
 
 
  
Because of the water shortage, the
 
Due to having a water shortage, the
 
Because of the water shortage was why the
 
Due to the water shortage which was why the
 
 
 
Question 14

 

 
 
 
Select the best wording of the underlined part of the sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose answer A. 
 
Because they were confined to the cramped cockpit of the small experimental plane and the two pilotsfound the long flight extremely uncomfortable.
 
 
 
  
plane and the two pilots
 
plane was why the two pilots
 
plane, the two pilots who
 
plane, the two pilots
 
 
 
Question 15

 

 
 
 
Select the best wording of the underlined part of the sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose answer A.
 
It is easy to learn to use the personal computer, and it has replaced the typewriter in most homes and offices.
 
 
 
  
It is easy to learn to use the personal computer, and it
 
It is easy to learn to use the personal computer, but it
 
The personal computer is easy to learn to use, because of which it
 
The personal computer, which is easy to learn to use,
 
 
 
Question 18

 

 
 
 
Select the best wording of the underlined part of the sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose answer A.
 
A failure as an administrator, the general made irrational decisions, he exceeded his authority, and alienating many of the best members of the staff.
 
 
 
  
made irrational decisions, he exceeded his authority, and alienating many of the best members of the staff
 
made decisions that were irrational, his authority was exceeded, and he alienated many of the best members of the staff
 
making irrational decisions, exceeding his authority, and many of the best members of the staff were alienated
 
made irrational decisions, exceeded his authority, and alienated many of the best members of the staff
 
 
 
 

 
 
 
What would you say is the purpose of this passage?
 
 
 
  
Arguing against other economic models such as communism
 
Convincing a reader that free market economics are effective at preventing abuses such as force and fraud
 
Explaining the meaning of or defining the term "free market."
 
Comparing free market economics to other systems
 
 
 
Question 21

 

 
 
 
In a free market economy, which of the protections would the government NOT offer?
 
 
 
  
Protecting personal property
 
Protecting individuals' trade interests abroad
 
Protecting against force
 
Protecting against fraud
 
 
 
 

 
 
 
Which of these terms best describes Paul's mental state as he portrays it here?
 
 
 
  
He is dealing with a lot of unresolved anger.
 
He feels very guilty about a sin he has committed recently.
 
He feels that he is divided against himself.
 
He is upset because he has low self-esteem.
 
 
 
Question 24

 

 
 
 
Why is Paul so frustrated?
 
 
 
  
He wants to do good, but he keeps on doing evil.
 
He feels stifled by the law.
 
Following God has turned out to be very difficult for him.
 
He is dying, and he feels like a prisoner in his body.
 
 
 
Question 26

 

 
 
 
Which sentence uses specific and detailed vocabulary to convey the theme?
 
 
 
  
Just beyond the rocks is the desolate road which mocks my worries by providing the enemy a valued avenue of approach.
 
The hateful noise belongs to the cloaked black figures bowing in unison.
 
Finally, my chill is warmed by an orange sun falling slowly out of sight.
 
The foreboding city of Baghdad brings chills of fear that are only penetrated by its transcendent sunsets. 
 
 
 
Question 27

 

 
 
 
What type of spatial order is used in the passage?
 
 
 
  
Neighborhood to sunsets
 
Ground to sky
 
Left to right
 
Inside to outside
 
 
 
Question 28

 

 
 
 
Identify the topic sentence of the paragraph:
 
 
 
  
It is then I realize, even in the valley of the shadow of death I find peace; the hand of God has painted a magnificent sunset just for me.
 
The brisk draft runs farther down my spine as I hear the eerie prayers shouted from rooftop to rooftop.
 
The foreboding city of Baghdad brings chills of fear that are only penetrated by its transcendent sunsets.
 
In the distance, beyond the menace, an exquisite array of colors pierces my doubts.
 
 
 
Question 29

 

 
 
 
Rewrite the following sentence that removes the passive voice and adds clarity.

Sentence: Just beyond the rocks is the desolate road which mocks my worries by providing the enemy a valued avenue of approach.
 
 
 
  
The desolate road beyond the rocks worries me because it provides the enemy an advantage.
 
The rocks ahead, being able to hide behind, in the desolate road, mocks my fears and provides a place for them to hide.
 
The desolate road ahead, which mocks my worries, provides a hiding place behind rocks for my enemy.
 
The enemy can hide behind the rocks and I am afraid because the road is desolate and they have a better approach.
 
 
 
Question 31

 

 
 
 
Which sentence‘s language fails to narrow this author’s argument towards a particular audience?
 
 
 
  
In today’s world, the computer’s phrases: “to delete”, “empty recycle bin” or even “erase from the hard drive” could mean censorship.
 
Whether in the media, through music, artistic expression,  political, social, theological, or  educational information, not within the norms of a particular mode of thought concerning those particular standards that they each support.
 
Others think it only comes through a dictatorship type of government.
 
Churches have their own laws and standards, some of which in ancient Biblical times even silenced women (1 Timothy 2: 11-14).
 
 
 
Question 32

 

 
 
 
In the paragraph, which of the following best describes the concluding sentence? 

Sentence: In censorship, silence is not always golden, even secrets between friends can be a form of voluntary censorship, or not!
 
 
 
  
The concluding sentence is ineffective because it introduces a new detail or supporting point.
 
The concluding sentence is highly effective and no revision is needed.
 
The concluding sentence is ineffective because an exclamation mark is used.
 
The concluding sentence is ineffective because it restates the topic sentence.
 
 
 
Question 33

 

 
 
 
How could the following sentence’s redundant language be best corrected? 

Sentence: Censorship is not permission, a green light, nor an allowance of complete self-expression.
 
 
 
  
Censorship is not permission or a green light, nor an allowance of complete self-expression.
 
Censorship is not a green light, nor an allowance of complete self-expression.
 
Censorship is not permission, nor an allowance of complete self-expression.
 
Censorship is not an allowance of complete self-expression.
 
 
 
Question 34

 

 
 
 
How could the author achieve more credibility in this passage?
 
 
 
  
By addressing the audience using second person point of view
 
By using sources to support his/her main claims
 
By providing more details regarding the definition of censorship
 
By adding personal experiences
 
 
 
Question 36

 

 
 
 
From the Narrative passage, rewrite this sentence so it is using specific and detailed vocabulary. 

Sentence: In most bridal stores, the dresses are larger than the average woman’s size; therefore, I had a difficult time envisioning myself wearing most that I had chosen to try on.
 
 
 
  
Many bridal stores have designer gowns that are larger than the average woman’s size; therefore, as I tried dresses on, it was difficult to picture myself wearing many of the gowns I chose.
 
Bridal stores have a lot of dresses that are bigger than most women’s sizes and are therefore difficult to picture yourself wearing them because they are not my size.
 
It was difficult when I tried them on because they weren’t my size, but they did have a lot of dresses there.
 
Many stores sell only larger sized dresses; therefore, I had a hard time imagining what I would look like in them.
 
 
 
Question 37

 

 
 
 
In this passage, which sentence is written in active voice?
 
 
 
  
I saw no purpose in continuing with my search.
 
In most bridal stores, the dresses are larger than the average woman’s size...
 
Yet, the first one I picked was similar to all the dresses I envied in the magazines.
 
The wedding process is often trying; however, during my wedding planning, the easiest and most essential aspect was choosing my gown.
 
 
 
Question 38

 

 
 
 
What is the point of view and voice of this paragraph?
 
 
 
  
First person, passive
 
First person, active
 
Third person, active
 
Third person , passive
 
 
 
Question 39

 

 
 
 
Which of the following is most likely the author’s audience in this paragraph?
 
 
 
  
All women
 
Wedding-dress designers
 
Engaged women
 
Married women
 
 
 
 

 
What type of paragraph is this?
 
 
 
  
Classification
 
Comparison
 
Definition
 
Description
 
 
 
Question 42

 

 
 
 
In the passage, what method of organization does the author employ?
 
 
 
  
Subject by subject (discuss one subject then the other)
 
Point by point (two subjects are discussed side by side)
 
The author merely focuses on similarities
 
The author does not establish differences or similarities
 
 
 
Question 43

 

 
 
 
What specific verb does the author overuse within the paragraph?
 
 
 
  
Transition
 
Minister
 
Leaving
 
Spend
 
 
 
Question 44

 

 
 
 
In the passage, which of the following does the author mostly utilize to compare?
 
 
 
  
Adverbs of time
 
Metaphors
 
Similes
 
Rhetorical questions
 
 
 
Question 46

 

 
 
 
Which of the following word(s) serves as an example of specific diction?
 
 
 
  
First time boat buyer
 
Operators
 
Draw
 
Ultimate
 
 
 
Question 47

 

 
 
 
In the reading passage which of the following could interfere with comprehension?
 
 
 
  
The author has not described the three kinds of boats.
 
The author has used long sentences without using proper punctuation.
 
There is a grammar mistake in every sentence of the passage.
 
The passage does not have a concluding sentence.
 
 
 
Question 48

 

 
 
 
Which sentence signals an abrupt change in point of view from third person “one” to second person “you”?
 
 
 
  
Most stream boats are usually small, light, an easy to maneuver form place to place.
 
So, to avoid feeling in over your head, make certain to weight the options of the different classifications of boats.
 
Most inland boats maintain a somewhat shallower draw.
 
The next choice one might consider is an inland boat.
 
 
 
Question 49

 

 
 
 
What could help to establish a clear audience in the passage?
 
 
 
  
To consistently use third person academic voice
 
To use second person point of view
 
To use first person point of view
 
To combine first, second, and third person point of view.
 
 
 
Question 51

 

 
 
 
What is the topic sentence of this passage?
 
 
 
  
These two opposing and talented groups come prepared for the game, having practiced for weeks.  The chemistry created by the fierce athletes, driven to win, stirs up tension between the two groups of fans, who come ready to cheer on their team.
 
The competition between the two football teams brings everyone to the stadium for the game.
 
All of these elements, the competition, the fans, and the setting, combine to create the perfect, football experience.
 
Many features combine to create the perfect football experience; these features include: the competition between the two teams, the fans, and the setting. 
 
 
 
Question 52

 

 
 
 
Based on the reading, what would be the correct first main point and subpoints in the outline?
 
 
 
  

I. Setting
a. Crisp, fall air
 
Big, blaring lights
b. 
I. Setting
a. Big, blaring lights
b. Food at the game
 

I. Competition
a. Two teams practiced for weeks
b. Driven to win
 
I. Competition
a. At the stadium
b. Cheerleaders
 
 
 
Question 53

 

 
 
 
Based on the reading, what is the writer’s main purpose?
 
 
 
  
persuade
 
entertain
 
argue
 
inform
 
 
 
Question 54

 

 
 
 
Which of the following sentences is a strong transitional sentence from one supporting detail about the topic to the next?
 
 
 
  
The chemistry created by the fierce athletes, driven to win, stirs up tension between the two groups of fans, who come ready to cheer on their team.
 
Many features combine to create the perfect football experience; these features include: the competition between the two teams, the fans, and the setting.
 
The marching bands play different songs in the stands like “Hey, Baby” or “Go, Big Red!”
 
All of these elements, the competition, the fans, and the setting, combine to create the perfect, football experience.
 
 
 
 

 
 
 
Consider the following sentence from the passage “Operating Room Housekeepers.” Which word or phrase could be deleted because it is implied?


Sentence: Housekeepers face many dangers everyday while cleaning operating rooms, such as: needle sticks, broken glass, blood spills, and overhead lights in the operating rooms.
 
 
 
  
needle
 
everyday
 
glass
 
overhead
 
 
 
Question 57

 

 
 
 
From what errors does the opening sentence of “Operating Room Housekeepers” suffer?

Sentence: When a person visits a hotel, hospital, or a shopping center, a person may encounter a housekeeper from time to time, trying to keep that particular type of facility clean.
 
 
 
  
Redundancy
 
Tense shifts
 
Comma splice
 
Cliché
 
 
 
Question 58

 

 
 
 
Which of the following serves as the best revision of the first half of the sentence below?

Sentence: A housekeeper needs to know how to protect themselves from these types of hazards; needles found in an operating room must be handled with care, knowing how to dispose them properly can prevent a housekeeper from getting a needle stick.
 
 
 
  
Housekeepers needs to know how to protect themselves from these types of hazards;
 
A housekeeper should know how to protect themselves from these types of hazards;
 
A housekeepers got to know how to protect himself from these types of hazards;
 
Housekeepers need to know how to protect themselves from these types of hazards;
 
 
 
Question 60

 

 
How does the writer support her claims in the 2nd and 4th paragraphs?
 
 
 
  
Uses personal experiences
 
Appeals to audience’s emotions
 
Cites credible sources
 
Anticipates rebuttals
 
 
 
Question 61

 

 
 
 
What information is missing from the introduction that was needed for the establishment of a strong thesis and inclusive presentation of all of the information in the essay?
 
 
 
  
The protection that marriage offers
 
The covenant contract
 
The relationship aspect of the covenant
 
The sacredness of marriage
 
 
 
Question 62

 

 
In the above essay, which of the following sentences would be considered a topic sentence?
 
 
 
  
The children born of couples, who are in covenant, reap the benefits of their parent’s faithfulness to each other and to God.
 
In addition, it is the first covenant established between God and mankind.
 
Because God so loved us, he designed the sanctity of marriage for our protection from generation to generation.
 
The covenant of marriage also protects the family unit.
 
 
 
 

Question 2

 

 
 
 
Shoppers hunting for low prices will be able to find them at this sale; however, he or she should do some comparison shopping first in order to recognize the true bargains.
 
 
 
  
hunting for
 
he or she
 
first
 
in order to
 
 
 
Question 3

 

 
 
 
Both Edna and me were asked to put aside our regular work so that we could help prepare the proposalfor the new client.
 
 
 
  
me
 
put aside
 
so that
 
for
 
 
 
Question 6

 

 
 
 
Like an iceberg, the Portuguese man-of-war conceals its most longest and most dangerous partsbeneath the surface of the sea.
 
 
 
  
Like an iceberg
 
its
 
most longest
 
beneath
 
 
 
Question 7

 

 
 
 
The validity of the results of any survey depend, in part, on the care with which the sample is chosen.
 
 
 
  
depend
 
in part
 
with which
 
is chosen
 
 
 
Question 8

 

Question 4

 

 
 
 
If the forest fire that broke out yesterday is not brought under control shortly, an entire village would have to be evacuated.
 
 
 
  
If
 
that broke out
 
shortly
 
would have 
 
 
 
 
 
Question 5

 

 
 
 
Like a distance runner, the Dodge Challenger saves its most quickest and most impressive accelerationfor the open road.
 
 
 
  
Like a distance runner
 
its
 
most quickest
 
for
 
 
 
 

 
 
 
Rear Admiral Grace Hopper, who developed COBOL, one of the first computer languages, retiringafter serving forty-three years in the United States Navy.
 
 
 
  
who developed
 
one of
 
retiring
 
after
 
 
 
Question 9

 

 
 
 
Deciding which one of the three plans for the library was the better one proved to be exceedinglydifficult because each of the architects had presented excellent ideas.
 
 
 
  
the better
 
proved to be
 
exceedingly
 
presented
 
 
 
Question 10

 

 
 
 
When we arrived in Montreal, we learned that a jazz festival had just began there.
 
 
 
  
When
 
we arrived
 
learned
 
just began
 
 
 
Question 11

 

 
 
 
Frank was very good at planning practical jokes; the joke he played on Alice and I was particularlyclever.
 
 
 
  
at planning
 
he played
 
I
 
particularly
 
 
 
Question 13

 

 
 
 
Select the best wording of the underlined part of the sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose answer A.
 
If he would know about the seminar, Rafael would not have called the meeting of the Hispanic Students' Union for the same evening.
 
 
 
  
If he would know
 
Not knowing
 
Inasmuch as he did not know
 
If he had known
 
 
 
Question 14

 

 
 
 
Select the best wording of the underlined part of the sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose answer A. 
 
Martina Arroya, like Leontyne Price, are celebrated for opera singing.
 
 
 
  
are celebrated for opera singing
 
is a celebrated opera singer
 
is a celebrated singer for doing opera
 
are opera singers and celebrated for doing so
 
 
 
Question 15

 

 
 
 
Select the best wording of the underlined part of the sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose answer A.
 
The polarization of the Earth is not fixed; in fact, the north and south magnetic poles which have exchanged positions five times over the last two million years.
 
 
 
  
poles which have exchanged positions
 
poles have exchanged positions
 
poles, exchanging positions
 
poles, their positions exchanged
 
 
 
Question 18

 

 
 
 
Select the best wording of the underlined part of the sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose answer A.
 
It is easy to learn to use the personal computer, and it has replaced the typewriter in most homes and offices.
 
 
 
  
It is easy to learn to use the personal computer, and it
 
It is easy to learn to use the personal computer, but it
 
The personal computer is easy to learn to use, because of which it
 
The personal computer, which is easy to learn to use,
 
 
 
Question 16

 

 
 
 
Select the best wording of the underlined part of the sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose answer A.
 
As students who commute to campus, we feel that you should be excused from class when the weather makes it hazardous for us to drive.
 
 
 
  
you should be excused
 
we should be excused
 
those should be excused
 
they should excuse us
 
 
 
Question 17

 

 
 
 
Select the best wording of the underlined part of the sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose answer A.
 
Because of the water shortage, the governor encouraged consumers to conserve the available supply.
 
 
 
  
Because of the water shortage, the
 
Due to having a water shortage, the
 
Because of the water shortage was why the
 
Due to the water shortage which was why the
 
 
 
 

 
 
 
What would you say is the purpose of this passage?
 
 
 
  
Arguing against other economic models such as communism
 
Convincing a reader that free market economics are effective at preventing abuses such as force and fraud
 
Explaining the meaning of or defining the term "free market."
 
Comparing free market economics to other systems
 
 
 
Question 21

 

 
 
 
In a free market economy, which of the protections would the government NOT offer?
 
 
 
  
Protecting personal property
 
Protecting individuals' trade interests abroad
 
Protecting against force
 
Protecting against fraud
 
 
 
 
Why is Paul so frustrated?
 
 
 
  
He wants to do good, but he keeps on doing evil.
 
He feels stifled by the law.
 
Following God has turned out to be very difficult for him.
 
He is dying, and he feels like a prisoner in his body.
 
 
 
Question 24

 

 
 
 
In this passage, does Paul, the author of Romans, describe the law as good?
 
 
 
  
Yes, he says it is "spiritual" and "good."
 
No, he thinks it has made him a slave.
 
No, the law makes him do evil, even when he wants to do good.
 
Sort of -- sometimes it is good, and sometimes it is bad.
 
 
 
 

 
 
 
Identify the topic sentence of the paragraph:
 
 
 
  
It is then I realize, even in the valley of the shadow of death I find peace; the hand of God has painted a magnificent sunset just for me.
 
The brisk draft runs farther down my spine as I hear the eerie prayers shouted from rooftop to rooftop.
 
The foreboding city of Baghdad brings chills of fear that are only penetrated by its transcendent sunsets.
 
In the distance, beyond the menace, an exquisite array of colors pierces my doubts.
 
 
 
Question 27

 

 
 
 
The vivid language in this passage makes it fit into which mode of writing?
 
 
 
  
Classification
 
Comparison
 
Definition
 
Descriptive
 
 
 
Question 28

 

 
 
 
What contrast does the author make to describe his epiphany at the end?
 
 
 
  
the empty road in contrast to the crowded rooftops
 
black-cloaked figures in contrast to the rocky ground
 
the chill of fear in contrast to the warmth of the sunset
 
the brisk draft in contrast to the dancing clouds
 
 
 
Question 29

 

 
 
 
Identify the transitional words that show the spatial order:
 
 
 
  
Just beneath, in the distance, farther down my spine
 
In the distance, beyond the menace, finally
 
Just beneath, beyond the menace, just above the sun
 
Farther down my spine, finally, from rooftop to rooftop
 
 
 
 

 
 
 
What mode of writing is primarily used in this passage?
 
 
 
  
Classification
 
Comparison
 
Descriptive
 
Definition
 
 
 
Question 32

 

 
 
 
In the passage, which of the following would be considered the topic sentence?
 
 
 
  
Others think it only comes through a dictatorship type of government.
 
Sometimes people confuse censorship with the thought of limiting it to only a couple of types or that censorship is always valid or deserving.
 
Still another example, would be by taking the 5th Amendment, individuals can choose to remain silent because the information may only serve to incriminate them.
 
In censorship, silence is not always golden.
 
 
 
Question 33

 

 
How could the following sentence’s redundant language be best corrected? 

Sentence: Censorship is not permission, a green light, nor an allowance of complete self-expression.
 
 
 
  
Censorship is not permission or a green light, nor an allowance of complete self-expression.
 
Censorship is not a green light, nor an allowance of complete self-expression.
 
Censorship is not permission, nor an allowance of complete self-expression.
 
Censorship is not an allowance of complete self-expression.
 
 
 
Question 34

 

 
 
 
Which sentence‘s language fails to narrow this author’s argument towards a particular audience?
 
 
 
  
In today’s world, the computer’s phrases: “to delete”, “empty recycle bin” or even “erase from the hard drive” could mean censorship.
 
Whether in the media, through music, artistic expression,  political, social, theological, or  educational information, not within the norms of a particular mode of thought concerning those particular standards that they each support.
 
Others think it only comes through a dictatorship type of government.
 
Churches have their own laws and standards, some of which in ancient Biblical times even silenced women (1 Timothy 2: 11-14).
 
 
 
 

 
 
 
From the Narrative passage, rewrite this sentence so it is using specific and detailed vocabulary. 

Sentence: In most bridal stores, the dresses are larger than the average woman’s size; therefore, I had a difficult time envisioning myself wearing most that I had chosen to try on.
 
 
 
  
Many bridal stores have designer gowns that are larger than the average woman’s size; therefore, as I tried dresses on, it was difficult to picture myself wearing many of the gowns I chose.
 
Bridal stores have a lot of dresses that are bigger than most women’s sizes and are therefore difficult to picture yourself wearing them because they are not my size.
 
It was difficult when I tried them on because they weren’t my size, but they did have a lot of dresses there.
 
Many stores sell only larger sized dresses; therefore, I had a hard time imagining what I would look like in them.
 
 
 
Question 37

 

 
 
 
Which of the following details might the author have added to strengthen the story?
 
 
 
  
The biblical definition of marriage
 
The design, color, and shape of the dress she bought
 
The date and place of her wedding ceremony
 
The way her husband proposed
 
 
 
Question 38

 

 
 
 
Which of the following details could the author have omitted because the information within the sentence is not relevant?
 
 
 
  
Because department-sized wedding shops can be intimidating, I made an appointment at a small, bridal boutique.
 
I was allowed to choose six gowns to take to the fitting room.
 
Yet, the first one I picked was similar to all the dresses I envied in the magazines.
 
All of the details are significant and should remain in the paragraph.
 
 
 
Question 39

 

 
 
 
This is a ______________ paragraph.
 
 
 
  
comparison
 
descriptive
 
illustration
 
narrative
 
 
 
 

 
 
 
In the passage, which of the following does the author mostly utilize to compare?
 
 
 
  
Adverbs of time
 
Metaphors
 
Similes
 
Rhetorical questions
 
 
 
Question 42

 

 
Which one of the following sentences contains passive voice?
 
 
 
  
“My week usually consists of departing for church.”
 
“I journeyed all over the United States and some in Canada and Mexico.”
 
“Currently, I spend most of my days alone, seldom leaving my bedroom except to do chores or spend time with the kids.”
 
“In my husband’s home church I am seldom asked to minister, yet I still receive calls from time to time asking me to minister in other churches.”
 
 
 
Question 43

 

 
 
 
In the passage, what method of organization does the author employ?
 
 
 
  
Subject by subject (discuss one subject then the other)
 
Point by point (two subjects are discussed side by side)
 
The author merely focuses on similarities
 
The author does not establish differences or similarities
 
 
 
Question 44

 

 
 
 
Which of the sentences below signals an abrupt change in the mode of writing?
 
 
 
  
Once upon a time, I knew tens of thousands of people in all the churches we visited.
 
I packed in less than thirty minutes for a journey of a few weeks to a month.
 
I journeyed all over the United States and some in Canada and Mexico.
 
I found myself in church several days a week; ministering in each service to one degree or another.
 
 
 
 

 
 
 
What is the best way to revise this sentence to include more active voice? 

Sentence: Boating is a great time, even when the fish are not biting pick the right size and kind of boat and the fun is increased.
 
 
 
  
Boating is a great time, even when the fish are not biting; pick the right size and kind of boat and the fun is increased.
 
Boating is a great time, even when the fish refuse to bite, but picking the right size and kind of boat increases the fun.
 
Boating is a great time, even when the fish are not biting; if you pick the right size and kind of boat, the fun is increased.
 
Boating is a great time, even when the fish are not biting; pick the right size and kind of boat and the fun is increased.
 
 
 
Question 47

 

 
 
 
Which sentence signals an abrupt change in point of view from third person “one” to second person “you”?
 
 
 
  
Most stream boats are usually small, light, an easy to maneuver form place to place.
 
So, to avoid feeling in over your head, make certain to weight the options of the different classifications of boats.
 
Most inland boats maintain a somewhat shallower draw.
 
The next choice one might consider is an inland boat.
 
 
 
Question 48

 

 
 
 
In the paragraph, which of the following sentences is a supporting detail?
 
 
 
  
The next choice one might consider is an inland boat.
 
Finally, the last category is the deep-sea boat class.
 
There are basically three different types of boats, which can be somewhat overwhelming to a potential first time boat buyer.
 
In most applications, a deep-sea boat can carry more passengers and cargo than the smaller inland variations, making it the ultimate camper or getaway.
 
 
 
Question 49

 

 
 
 
Which one of the following sentences contains a cliché?
 
 
 
  
The intended purpose a boat will be used for should help determine the type of boat to be purchased.
 
Most stream boats require only one operator and are typically smaller making them the simplest to use.
 
So, to avoid feeling in over your head, make certain to weigh the options of the different classifications of boats.
 
There are basically three different types of boats, which can be somewhat overwhelming to a potential first time boat buyer.
 
 
 
Question 51

 

 
 
 
In the sentence “The football game setting also contributes to the perfect football experience” identify the transitional word
 
 
 
  
Also
 
Setting
 
Perfect
 
Game
 
 
 
Question 52

 

 
 
 
Based on the topic sentence in the passage, what are the main points?
 
 
 
  
fierce athletes, competition, and setting
 
competition, setting, and fans
 
marching band, fierce athletes, and competition
 
teams, setting, and competition
 
 
 
Question 53

 

 
 
 
Which word(s) from the sentence below need(s) to be changed to correct an error in parallel construction? 

Sentence: “These eager and zealous fans show their support through screams, standing, shouting, jumping up and down, and blowing horns.”
 
 
 
  
Screams
 
Up and down
 
Horns
 
Eager and zealous
 
 
 
Question 54

 

 
 
 
From the passage, identify the cliché in the following sentences. “The crisp, fall air inspires fans to wear sweatshirts and bring fleece blankets.  The big, blaring lights draw attention to the activity on the field, even in the dark of night.  Warm hot chocolate, hot dogs, and nachos add to the overall football experience.”
 
 
 
  
inspires fans to wear sweatshirts
 
The big, blaring lights
 
the dark of night
 
Warm hot chocolate
 
 
 
 
What is the topic sentence of paragraph 4?
 
 
 
  
Housekeepers face many dangers everyday while cleaning operating rooms, such as: needle sticks, broken glass, blood spills, and overhead lights in the operating rooms.
 
A housekeeper needs to know how to protect themselves from these types of hazards; needles found in an operating room must be handled with care, knowing how to dispose them properly can prevent a housekeeper from getting a needle stick.
 
Blood spills and broken glass must be handled with caution, especially if broken glass is found with blood present; having the proper tools and equipment will help the housekeeper from getting cut on the broken glass.
 
Handling these types of situations properly will help the housekeeper stay safe and cleaning the rooms more enjoyable.
 
 
 
Question 57

 

 
 
 
Considering the author’s mode of writing, which of the following would work best as an alternative thesis statement?
 
 
 
  
Before pursuing or applying for an operating room housekeeping position, one should know the average salary and qualifications.
 
My experiences as an operating room housekeeper have taught me the value of knowing the safety precautions before the first day on the job.
 
The key areas that distinguish an operating room housekeeper from other housekeepers are the work environment, the dress code, and the potential dangers involved.
 
A job as an operating room housekeeper is very rewarding.
 
 
 
Question 58

 

 
 
 
Consider the following sentence from the passage “Operating Room Housekeepers.” Which word or phrase could be deleted because it is implied?


Sentence: Housekeepers face many dangers everyday while cleaning operating rooms, such as: needle sticks, broken glass, blood spills, and overhead lights in the operating rooms.
 
 
 
  
needle
 
everyday
 
glass
 
overhead
 
 
 
 
Which is the best revision of the following sentence? 

Sentence: When couples develop intimacy with God, it also strengthens the marriage.
 
 
 
  
When couples develop godly intimacy, they are strengthened in marriage.
 
When couples develop intimacy with God, their marriages are strengthened.
 
When couples develop intimacy with God, their marriage is strengthened.
 
When couples develop intimacy, the marriage is strengthened with God.
 
 
 
Question 61

 

 
Consider the following sentence from the essay “Marriage is Sacred.” Which revised sentence best avoids the passive voice? 

Sentence: Couples should understand that when they marry they are entering into the most sacred of institutions established by God; it is a Holy covenant, not to be taken lightly.
 
 
 
  
Couples should understand that when they marry they are entering into the most sacred of institutions established by God; it is a Holy covenant, not to be taken lightly.
 
Couples who marry enter a sacred, holy institution established by God and should not take it lightly.
 
Couples, when married, are entering the most sacred of institutions established by God; it is a Holy covenant, not to be taken lightly.
 
Should a couple marry, they need to understand that they are entering into the most sacred of institutions established by God; it is a Holy covenant, not to be taken lightly. 
 
 
 
Question 62

 

 
 
 
The author’s overall purpose is to _____________.
 
 
 
  
Convince couples of the seriousness of marital commitment.
 
Describe what happens to couples who marry too quickly.
 
Report the current state of marriages in the United States.
 
Argue that people’s view of marriage has changed over the years.
 
 
 
 

Question 2

 

 
 
 
When the leaders of the American Revolution sought foreign help, they logically turned to France and Spain, and both countries responded favorable.
 
 
 
  
When
 
logically
 
turned to
 
favorable
 
 
 
Question 3

 

 
 
 
Because the bamboo plant on which the panda feeds is now scarce, naturalists are worried about theirchances of survival.
 
 
 
  
on which
 
is now scarce
 
about
 
their
 
 
 
Question 6

 

 
 
 
Because the public-address system was not working proper, only the people who were sitting in the front of the auditorium could hear the speaker clearly.


 
 
 
  
was not working
 
proper
 
only
 
could hear
 
 
 
Question 7

 

 
 
 
When the traffic light was installed at the intersection of Broad Street and Washington Avenue, the flow of rush-hour traffic improves noticeably.
 
 
 
  
installed at
 
and
 
improves
 
noticeably
 
 
 
Question 8

 

 
 
 
As visitors enter the Museum of the Plains Indian, you see four large murals, painted by the Blackfoot artist Victor Pepion, that depict several aspects of the buffalo hunt.
 
 
 
  
As
 
you see
 
painted by
 
aspects of
 
 
 
Question 9

 

Question 4

 

 
 
 
Elizabeth Gaskell's nineteenth-century novel North and South draws an extended contrast between the attractive southern countryside of Britain with the grimy factory towns in the north.
 
 
 
  
draws
 
extended
 
with
 
in
 
 
 
Question 5

 

 
 
 
Because Maria had ran so fast during the first part of the race, she was beginning to tire by the time she reached the steep grade in the middle of the course. 
 
 
 
  
had ran 
 
so fast 
 
to tire 
 
by the time    
 
 
 
 

 
 
 
If the forest fire that broke out yesterday is not brought under control shortly, an entire village would have to be evacuated.
 
 
 
  
If
 
that broke out
 
shortly
 
would have 
 
 
 
 
 
Question 10

 

 
 
 
Rear Admiral Grace Hopper, who developed COBOL, one of the first computer languages, retiringafter serving forty-three years in the United States Navy.
 
 
 
  
who developed
 
one of
 
retiring
 
after
 
 
 
Question 11

 

 
 
 
Even after having prepared in the most thoroughest manner, Mark did not feel confident that his presentation would be successful.
 
 
 
  
Even after
 
most thoroughest
 
confident that
 
would be
 
 
 
 

 
 
 
Select the best wording of the underlined part of the sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose answer A.
 
It is easy to learn to use the personal computer, and it has replaced the typewriter in most homes and offices.
 
 
 
  
It is easy to learn to use the personal computer, and it
 
It is easy to learn to use the personal computer, but it
 
The personal computer is easy to learn to use, because of which it
 
The personal computer, which is easy to learn to use,
 
 
 
Question 14

 

 
 
 
Select the best wording of the underlined part of the sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose answer A.
 
As students who commute to campus, we feel that you should be excused from class when the weather makes it hazardous for us to drive.
 
 
 
  
you should be excused
 
we should be excused
 
those should be excused
 
they should excuse us
 
 
 
Question 17

 

 
 
 
Select the best wording of the underlined part of the sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose answer A.
 
Sustained high temperatures can weaken tires, causing blowouts and tread separations.
 
 
 
  
causing blowouts and tread separations
 
this causes blowouts and tread separations
 
blowouts and tread separations result
 
which is the reason for blowouts and tread separations to happen
 
 
 
Question 18

 

 
 
 
Select the best wording of the underlined part of the sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose answer A.
 
Because of the water shortage, the governor encouraged consumers to conserve the available supply.
 
 
 
  
Because of the water shortage, the
 
Due to having a water shortage, the
 
Because of the water shortage was why the
 
Due to the water shortage which was why the
 
 
 
Question 15

 

 
 
 
Select the best wording of the underlined part of the sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose answer A.
 
If he would know about the seminar, Rafael would not have called the meeting of the Hispanic Students' Union for the same evening.
 
 
 
  
If he would know
 
Not knowing
 
Inasmuch as he did not know
 
If he had known
 
 
 
Question 16

 

 
 
 
Select the best wording of the underlined part of the sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose answer A.
 
A failure as an administrator, the general made irrational decisions, he exceeded his authority, and alienating many of the best members of the staff.
 
 
 
  
made irrational decisions, he exceeded his authority, and alienating many of the best members of the staff
 
made decisions that were irrational, his authority was exceeded, and he alienated many of the best members of the staff
 
making irrational decisions, exceeding his authority, and many of the best members of the staff were alienated
 
made irrational decisions, exceeded his authority, and alienated many of the best members of the staff
 
 
 
Question 20

 

 
 
 
In a free market economy, which of the protections would the government NOT offer?
 
 
 
  
Protecting personal property
 
Protecting individuals' trade interests abroad
 
Protecting against force
 
Protecting against fraud
 
 
 
Question 21

 

 
 
 
What would you say is the purpose of this passage?
 
 
 
  
Arguing against other economic models such as communism
 
Convincing a reader that free market economics are effective at preventing abuses such as force and fraud
 
Explaining the meaning of or defining the term "free market."
 
Comparing free market economics to other systems
 
 
 
 

 
 
 
Which of these terms best describes Paul's mental state as he portrays it here?
 
 
 
  
He is dealing with a lot of unresolved anger.
 
He feels very guilty about a sin he has committed recently.
 
He feels that he is divided against himself.
 
He is upset because he has low self-esteem.
 
 
 
Question 24

 

 
 
 
What is the solution Paul gives in this passage to the problem he discusses?
 
 
 
  
He thinks the law should be abolished.
 
He trusts Jesus to deliver him.
 
He is waiting for death, when the battle will be over.
 
Whatever bad he does, he blames on the sin in him; therefore, he doesn't feel guilty anymore.
 
 
 
Question 26

 

 
 
 
What contrast does the author make to describe his epiphany at the end?
 
 
 
  
the empty road in contrast to the crowded rooftops
 
black-cloaked figures in contrast to the rocky ground
 
the chill of fear in contrast to the warmth of the sunset
 
the brisk draft in contrast to the dancing clouds
 
 
 
Question 27

 

 
 
 
The author describes several things, but his overall purpose is to describe
 
 
 
  
the brutality of war
 
the city of Baghdad
 
the beauty of God’s creation
 
the peace God provides amidst fear
 
 
 
Question 28

 

 
 
 
Rewrite the following sentence that removes the passive voice and adds clarity.

Sentence: Just beyond the rocks is the desolate road which mocks my worries by providing the enemy a valued avenue of approach.
 
 
 
  
The desolate road beyond the rocks worries me because it provides the enemy an advantage.
 
The rocks ahead, being able to hide behind, in the desolate road, mocks my fears and provides a place for them to hide.
 
The desolate road ahead, which mocks my worries, provides a hiding place behind rocks for my enemy.
 
The enemy can hide behind the rocks and I am afraid because the road is desolate and they have a better approach.
 
 
 
Question 29

 

 
 
 
Identify the transitional words that show the spatial order:
 
 
 
  
Just beneath, in the distance, farther down my spine
 
In the distance, beyond the menace, finally
 
Just beneath, beyond the menace, just above the sun
 
Farther down my spine, finally, from rooftop to rooftop
 
 
 
 

 
 
 
Which of the following sentences presents the denotative meaning of the word “censorship”?
 
 
 
  
In censorship, silence is not always golden, even secrets between friends can be a form of voluntary censorship, or not!
 
Sometimes people confuse censorship with the thought of limiting it to only a couple of types or that censorship is always valid or deserving.
 
The word "censorship” means to silence, limit, or repress information.
 
Still another example, would be by taking the 5th Amendment, individuals can choose to remain silent because the information may only serve to incriminate them.
 
 
 
Question 32

 

 
 
 
Which sentence’s tone and idea strays furthest from the point’s main argument?
 
 
 
  
The word "censorship” means to silence, limit, or repress information.
 
Churches have their own laws and standards, some of which in ancient Biblical times even silenced women (1 Timothy 2: 11-14).
 
Censorship is not permission, a green light, nor an allowance of complete self-expression.
 
Rather, it is the control of information showing itself in the form of a boycott, embargo, injunction, restriction, and last but not least, ‘silence’.
 
 
 
Question 33

 

 
 
 
What specific word serves as the primary focus for the paragraph?
 
 
 
  
Silence
 
Golden
 
Censorship
 
Protection
 
 
 
Question 34

 

 
How could the following sentence’s redundant language be best corrected? 

Sentence: Censorship is not permission, a green light, nor an allowance of complete self-expression.
 
 
 
  
Censorship is not permission or a green light, nor an allowance of complete self-expression.
 
Censorship is not a green light, nor an allowance of complete self-expression.
 
Censorship is not permission, nor an allowance of complete self-expression.
 
Censorship is not an allowance of complete self-expression.
 
 
 
 

 
 
 
Which of the following details might the author have added to strengthen the story?
 
 
 
  
The biblical definition of marriage
 
The design, color, and shape of the dress she bought
 
The date and place of her wedding ceremony
 
The way her husband proposed
 
 
 
Question 37

 

 
 
 
Which of the following is most likely the author’s audience in this paragraph?
 
 
 
  
All women
 
Wedding-dress designers
 
Engaged women
 
Married women
 
 
 
Question 38

 

 
 
 
In this passage, which of the following sentences would be considered the topic sentence?
 
 
 
  
The wedding process is often trying; however, during my wedding planning, the easiest and most essential aspect was choosing my gown.
 
Because department-sized wedding shops can be intimidating, I made an appointment at a small, bridal boutique.
 
It was evident that I had found the perfect gown for my wedding.
 
The preparation for a wedding can be difficult at times; yet, I found the perfect dress to ensure a key element of my wedding day.
 
 
 
Question 39

 

 
 
 
From the Narrative passage, rewrite this sentence so it is using specific and detailed vocabulary. 

Sentence: In most bridal stores, the dresses are larger than the average woman’s size; therefore, I had a difficult time envisioning myself wearing most that I had chosen to try on.
 
 
 
  
Many bridal stores have designer gowns that are larger than the average woman’s size; therefore, as I tried dresses on, it was difficult to picture myself wearing many of the gowns I chose.
 
Bridal stores have a lot of dresses that are bigger than most women’s sizes and are therefore difficult to picture yourself wearing them because they are not my size.
 
It was difficult when I tried them on because they weren’t my size, but they did have a lot of dresses there.
 
Many stores sell only larger sized dresses; therefore, I had a hard time imagining what I would look like in them.
 
 
 
 

 
 
 
In the passage, which of the following sentences contains a cliché and possible exaggeration?
 
 
 
  
Now, I find myself hesitating to leave the house to acquire groceries.
 
In my husband’s home church I am seldom asked to minister, yet I still receive calls from time to time asking me to minister in other churches.
 
Once upon a time, I knew tens of thousands of people in all the churches we visited; meeting new people as we traveled back to these places yearly.
 
This change of lifestyle is the hardest transition of my adult life; from the life I had to the life I have.
 
 
 
Question 42

 

 
 
 
What type of paragraph is this?
 
 
 
  
Classification
 
Comparison
 
Definition
 
Description
 
 
 
Question 43

 

 
 
 
In this passage, which sentence reinforces the topic sentence and signals conclusion?
 
 
 
  
Now, I find myself hesitating to leave the house to acquire groceries.
 
I found myself in church several days a week, ministering in each service to one degree or another.
 
The change of lifestyle is the hardest transition of my adult life, from the life I had to the life I have.
 
I journeyed all over the United States and some in Canada and Mexico.
 
 
 
Question 44

 

 
 
 
In the passage, which of the following does the author mostly utilize to compare?
 
 
 
  
Adverbs of time
 
Metaphors
 
Similes
 
Rhetorical questions
 
 
 
 

 
 
 
Which mode of writing is used in this passage?
 
 
 
  
classification
 
comparison
 
definition
 
narrative
 
 
 
Question 47

 

 
 
 
Which one of the following sentences contains a cliché?
 
 
 
  
The intended purpose a boat will be used for should help determine the type of boat to be purchased.
 
Most stream boats require only one operator and are typically smaller making them the simplest to use.
 
So, to avoid feeling in over your head, make certain to weigh the options of the different classifications of boats.
 
There are basically three different types of boats, which can be somewhat overwhelming to a potential first time boat buyer.
 
 
 
Question 48

 

 
 
 
Which of the following phrases serves as an effective transitional phrase?
 
 
 
  
Most stream boats require
 
The next choice
 
Most inland boats
 
In most applications
 
 
 
Question 49

 

 
 
 
How could the author achieve credibility in this passage?
 
 
 
  
By addressing the audience using second person point of view
 
By using sources to support his/her main claims
 
By providing more details regarding the three classification of boats
 
By adding personal experiences
 
 
 
 

 
 
 
What is the topic sentence of this passage?
 
 
 
  
These two opposing and talented groups come prepared for the game, having practiced for weeks.  The chemistry created by the fierce athletes, driven to win, stirs up tension between the two groups of fans, who come ready to cheer on their team.
 
The competition between the two football teams brings everyone to the stadium for the game.
 
All of these elements, the competition, the fans, and the setting, combine to create the perfect, football experience.
 
Many features combine to create the perfect football experience; these features include: the competition between the two teams, the fans, and the setting. 
 
 
 
Question 52

 

 
 
 
Which of the following is most likely the author’s intended audience?
 
 
 
  
someone unfamiliar with football game events
 
someone familiar with football game events
 
football team managers and owners
 
high school football team players
 
 
 
Question 53

 

 
 
 
The author’s main purpose is to
 
 
 
  
convince readers to attend a football game.
 
describe the things one might see at a football game.
 
explain the elements that make a football game a unique and enjoyable event.
 
illustrate why he enjoys outdoor sporting events more than indoor sporting events.
 
 
 
Question 54

 

 
 
 
Which word(s) from the sentence below need(s) to be changed to correct an error in parallel construction? 

Sentence: “These eager and zealous fans show their support through screams, standing, shouting, jumping up and down, and blowing horns.”
 
 
 
  
Screams
 
Up and down
 
Horns
 
Eager and zealous
 
 
 
 

 
 
 
Which of the following serves as the best revision for the second half of the sentence below?

Sentence: A housekeeper needs to know how to protect themselves from these types of hazards; needles found in an operating room must be handled with care, knowing how to dispose them properly can prevent a housekeeper from getting a needle stick.
 
 
 
  
needles found in an operating room must be handled with care,  as to knowing how to dispose them properly can prevent a housekeeper from getting a needle stick.
 
needles found in an operating room must be handled with care, and knowing how to dispose them properly can prevent a housekeeper from getting a needle stick.
 
needles found in an operating room must be handled with care because knowing how to dispose of them properly can prevent a housekeeper from getting a needle stick.
 
needles found in an operating room are handled with care, to know how to dispose of them properly can prevent a housekeeper from getting a needle stick. 
 
 
 
Question 57

 

 
In the above essay, which of the following sentences would be considered a topic sentence?
 
 
 
  
Handling these types of situations properly will help the housekeeper stay safe and cleaning the rooms more enjoyable.
 
Blood spills and broken glass must be handled with caution, especially if broken glass is found with blood present.
 
The operating room housekeeper must become familiar with his or her surroundings.
 
He or she may see a housekeeper cleaning a room in a hotel, emptying trash cans in a shopping center, or using an automatic scrubber to maintain the main hallways of a hospital.
 
 
 
Question 58

 

 
 
 
Considering the author’s mode of writing, which of the following would work best as an alternative thesis statement?
 
 
 
  
Before pursuing or applying for an operating room housekeeping position, one should know the average salary and qualifications.
 
My experiences as an operating room housekeeper have taught me the value of knowing the safety precautions before the first day on the job.
 
The key areas that distinguish an operating room housekeeper from other housekeepers are the work environment, the dress code, and the potential dangers involved.
 
A job as an operating room housekeeper is very rewarding.
 
 
 
 

 
Considering the author’s mode of writing, which of the following would work best as an alternative thesis statement?
 
 
 
  
Because I now understand the biblical view of love, my marriage has become much stronger.
 
According to the Bible, divorce is not a part of God’s plan for married couples.
 
Because so many marriages end in divorce, couples should understand that marriage is a sacred institution established by God, not just a legal contract or social union to be taken lightly.
 
Divorce is the leading cause of many health, behavioral, and emotional problems today.
 
 
 
Question 61

 

 
Which of the following improves the second sentence in the last paragraph from a vague assertion to a more specific one? 

Sentence: Acknowledging this will greatly impact and reverse the current culture and views on marriage.
 
 
 
  
Acknowledging that marriage is serious will greatly impact and reverse the current culture and views on marriage.
 
Acknowledging this will greatly impact and reverse the current cultural views on marriage.
 
When people acknowledge that marriage is considered holy, it will reverse the current culture and views on marriage.
 
When people acknowledge the holiness and seriousness of marriage, their influence will reverse the current cultural views of marriage.
 
 
 
Question 62

 

 
 
 
The author’s overall purpose is to _____________.
 
 
 
  
Convince couples of the seriousness of marital commitment.
 
Describe what happens to couples who marry too quickly.
 
Report the current state of marriages in the United States.
 
Argue that people’s view of marriage has changed over the years.
 
 
 
 

 

 
 
 
After hearing Smith's surprising report, Detective Meng began to inspect
that the witness had been lying.
 
 
 
  
After hearing
 
surprising
 
inspect
 
had been lying
 
 
 
Question 3

 

 
 
 
Deciding which one of the three plans for the library was the better one proved to be exceedinglydifficult because each of the architects had presented excellent ideas.
 
 
 
  
the better
 
proved to be
 
exceedingly
 
presented
 
 
 
Question 6

 

 
 
 
In the days when baseball parks were small, with stands close to the playing fields, fans not only recognized individual players easily but also would be more knowledgeable about the game.
 
 
 
  
when
 
small
 
with
 
would be
 
 
 
Question 7

 

 
 
 
Even after
having prepared in the most thoroughest manner, Mark did not feel confident that his presentationwould be successful.
 
 
 
  
Even after
 
most thoroughest
 
confident that
 
would be
 
 
 
Question 8

 

Question 4

 

 
 
 
Shoppers hunting for low prices will be able to find them at this sale; however, he or she should do some comparison shopping first in order to
recognize the true bargains.
 
 
 
  
hunting for
 
he or she
 
first
 
in order to
 
 
 
Question 5

 

 
 
 
If the forest fire that broke out yesterday is not brought under control shortly, an entire villagewould have to be evacuated.
 
 
 
  
If
 
that broke out
 
shortly
 
would have 
 
 
 
 
 
 

 
 
 
Because Maria had ran so fast during the first part of the race, she was beginning to tire by the time she reached the steep grade in the middle of the course. 
 
 
 
  
had ran 
 
so fast 
 
to tire 
 
by the time    
 
 
 
Question 9

 

 
 
 
According to the article, more money is spent in the Unites States each year on health care then onnational defense.
 
 
 
  
According to
 
is spent
 
then
 
on
 
 
 
Question 10

 

 
 
 
As visitors enter the Museum of the Plains Indian, you see four large murals, painted by the Blackfoot artist Victor Pepion, that depict several aspects of the buffalo hunt.
 
 
 
  
As
 
you see
 
painted by
 
aspects of
 
 
 
Question 11

 

 
 
 
Inez and Dave plan to apply for part-time jobs, but, although they both are full-time students, Inez wants to work longer hours than him.
 
 
 
  
plan to apply
 
although
 
longer hours
 
than him
 
 
 
 
Select the best wording of the underlined part of the sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose answer A.
 
As students who commute to campus, we feel that you should be excused from class when the weather makes it hazardous for us to drive.
 
 
 
  
you should be excused
 
we should be excused
 
those should be excused
 
they should excuse us
 
 
 
Question 14

 

 
 
 
Select the best wording of the underlined part of the sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose answer A.
 
If he would know
about the seminar, Rafael would not have called the meeting of the Hispanic Students' Union for the same evening.
 
 
 
  
If he would know
 
Not knowing
 
Inasmuch as he did not know
 
If he had known
 
 
 
Question 17

 

 
 
 
Select the best wording of the underlined part of the sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose answer A.
 
The room, which has been painted white, and it still looks small and gloomy.
 
 
 
  
The room, which has been painted white, and
 
Painting the room white, after which
 
Even though the room has been painted white,
 
Despite the white paint for the room,
 
 
 
Question 18

 

 
 
 
Select the best wording of the underlined part of the sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose answer A.
 
Which of the two athletes is the better runner is difficult to say; both have abundant speed, energy, and endurance.
 
 
 
  
runner is difficult to say; both
 
runner, it is difficult to say; and both
 
runner is difficult to say, both
 
runner, being difficult to say because both
 
 
 
Question 15

 

 
 
 
Select the best wording of the underlined part of the sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose answer A.
 
It is easy to learn to use the personal computer, and it has replaced the typewriter in most homes and offices.
 
 
 
  
It is easy to learn to use the personal computer, and it
 
It is easy to learn to use the personal computer, but it
 
The personal computer is easy to learn to use, because of which it
 
The personal computer, which is easy to learn to use,
 
 
 
Question 16

 

 
 
 
Select the best wording of the underlined part of the sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose answer A.
 
Because of the water shortage, the governor encouraged consumers to conserve the available supply.
 
 
 
  
Because of the water shortage, the
 
Due to having a water shortage, the
 
Because of the water shortage was why the
 
Due to the water shortage which was why the
 
 
 
 

 
 
 
Which of these terms or ideas do you NOT need to understand ahead of time to be able to comprehend the meaning of this passage?
 
 
 
  
Government intervention
 
Supply and demand
 
Free market economics
 
Force and fraud
 
 
 
Question 21

 

 
 
 
Which of these principles or beliefs underlies free market economic philosophy?
 
 
 
  
The belief that buyers and sellers are best equipped to decide among themselves about what is fair and equitable
 
The principle that taxation is unfair to citizens because it requires people to pay for services that are used by others
 
The principle that governments are not to be trusted to handle their citizens' economic transactions
 
The belief that all citizens should have equal rights in areas such as voting
 
 
 
Question 23

 

 
 
 
Why is Paul so frustrated?
 
 
 
  
He wants to do good, but he keeps on doing evil.
 
He feels stifled by the law.
 
Following God has turned out to be very difficult for him.
 
He is dying, and he feels like a prisoner in his body.
 
 
 
Question 24

 

 
 
 
In this passage, does Paul, the author of Romans, describe the law as good?
 
 
 
  
Yes, he says it is "spiritual" and "good."
 
No, he thinks it has made him a slave.
 
No, the law makes him do evil, even when he wants to do good.
 
Sort of -- sometimes it is good, and sometimes it is bad.
 
 
 
Question 26

 

 
 
 
Rewrite the following sentence that removes the passive voice and adds clarity.
Sentence: Just beyond the rocks is the desolate road which mocks my worries by providing the enemy a valued avenue of approach.
 
 
 
  
The desolate road beyond the rocks worries me because it provides the enemy an advantage.
 
The rocks ahead, being able to hide behind, in the desolate road, mocks my fears and provides a place for them to hide.
 
The desolate road ahead, which mocks my worries, provides a hiding place behind rocks for my enemy.
 
The enemy can hide behind the rocks and I am afraid because the road is desolate and they have a better approach.
 
 
 
Question 27

 

 
 
 
Which sentence best uses tone to create an appropriate and highly effective picture of the author’s attitude towards his surroundings?
 
 
 
  
They remind me of the joy provided by my salvation.
 
The hateful noise belongs to the cloaked black figures bowing in unison.
 
It is then I realize, even in the valley of the shadow of death I find peace; the hand of God has painted a magnificent sunset just for me.
 
The rocky ground just beneath the barrel of my rigid M240B machine gun is carefully scanned for explosives. 
 
 
 
Question 28

 

 
 
 
The vivid language in this passage makes it fit into which mode of writing?
 
 
 
  
Classification
 
Comparison
 
Definition
 
Descriptive
 
 
 
Question 29

 

 
 
 
What is the vantage point of the author in the passage?
 
 
 
  
On the ground
 
Standing behind a wall
 
On a rooftop above the city
 
In the barracks
 
 
 
 

 
 
 
In the passage, which of the following would be considered the topic sentence?
 
 
 
  
Others think it only comes through a dictatorship type of government.
 
Sometimes people confuse censorship with the thought of limiting it to only a couple of types or that censorship is always valid or deserving.
 
Still another example, would be by taking the 5th Amendment, individuals can choose to remain silent because the information may only serve to incriminate them.
 
In censorship, silence is not always golden.
 
 
 
Question 32

 

 
 
 
Which of the following sentences best defines “censorship” in connotative terms?
 
 
 
  
Rather, it [censorship] is the control of information showing itself in the form of a boycott, embargo, injunction, restriction, and last but not least, “silence.”
 
In censorship, silence is not always golden.
 
The word "censorship” means to silence, limit, or repress information.
 
Still another example, would be by taking the 5th Amendment, individuals can choose to remain silent because the information may only serve to incriminate them.
 
 
 
Question 33

 

 
 
 
In the paragraph, which of the following best describes the concluding sentence?
 Sentence: In censorship, silence is not always golden, even secrets between friends can be a form of voluntary censorship, or not!
 
 
 
  
The concluding sentence is ineffective because it introduces a new detail or supporting point.
 
The concluding sentence is highly effective and no revision is needed.
 
The concluding sentence is ineffective because an exclamation mark is used.
 
The concluding sentence is ineffective because it restates the topic sentence.
 
 
 
Question 34

 

 
 
 
Which sentence employs a cliché as part of the argument?
 
 
 
  
In today’s world, the computer’s phrases: “to delete”, “empty recycle bin” or even “erase from the hard drive” could mean censorship.
 
Others think it only comes through a dictatorship type of government.
 
Consequently, it also seems a means of protection for them.
 
In censorship, silence is not always golden.
 
 
 
Question 36

 

 
 
 
Which of the following is most likely the author’s audience in this paragraph?
 
 
 
  
All women
 
Wedding-dress designers
 
Engaged women
 
Married women
 
 
 
Question 37

 

 
 
 
The author chose six dresses for the fitting room, but she bought the first dress she tried on. What might the author’s purpose be in providing these details?
 
 
 
  
To explain the dress-fitting policies in bridal boutiques.
 
To prove how easy wedding dress shopping should be for all brides.
 
To describe the overwhelming task of dress shopping. 
 
To emphasize how quickly she found the perfect dress.
 
 
 
Question 38

 

 
 
 
What is the topic of the paragraph?
 
 
 
  
Finding the perfect wedding gown
 
Planning the perfect wedding
 
Day at the bridal shop
 
The wedding process
 
 
 
Question 39

 

 
 
 
What is the best way to revise this passive sentence to active voice from this passage? 
Sentence: I was allowed to choose six gowns to take to the fitting room.
 
 
 
  
I could choose six gowns to take with me into the fitting rooms.
 
I chose six gowns to take into the fitting room.
 
Into the fitting room, I was able to take six gowns.
 
At the store, I was allowed to choose six gowns to take to the fitting room.
 
 
 
Question 41

 

 
 
 
What specific verb does the author overuse within the paragraph?
 
 
 
  
Transition
 
Minister
 
Leaving
 
Spend
 
 
 
Question 42

 

 
 
 
What would be considered the main idea of this passage?
 
 
 
  
Marriage causes changes in a person’s lifestyle.
 
Ministers live a transient lifestyle.
 
Marriage causes wives to be reclusive.
 
Worshipping at a different churches is a blessing.
 
 
 
Question 43

 

 
 
 
In this passage, which sentence reinforces the topic sentence and signals conclusion?
 
 
 
  
Now, I find myself hesitating to leave the house to acquire groceries.
 
I found myself in church several days a week, ministering in each service to one degree or another.
 
The change of lifestyle is the hardest transition of my adult life, from the life I had to the life I have.
 
I journeyed all over the United States and some in Canada and Mexico.
 
 
 
Question 44

 

 
Which of the following sentences signals contrast within the passage?
 
 
 
  
As a single teenager and the daughter of an evangelistic minister, traveling was a way of life.
 
Now, I find myself hesitating to leave the house to acquire groceries.
 
My week usually consists of departing for church, which is situated across the street.
 
I found myself in church several days a week, ministering in each service to one degree or another.
 
 
 
Question 46

 

 
 
 
What could help to establish a clear audience in the passage?
 
 
 
  
To consistently use third person academic voice
 
To use second person point of view
 
To use first person point of view
 
To combine first, second, and third person point of view.
 
 
 
Question 47

 

 
 
 
What is the best way to revise this sentence to include more active voice?
Sentence: Boating is a great time, even when the fish are not biting pick the right size and kind of boat and the fun is increased.
 
 
 
  
Boating is a great time, even when the fish are not biting; pick the right size and kind of boat and the fun is increased.
 
Boating is a great time, even when the fish refuse to bite, but picking the right size and kind of boat increases the fun.
 
Boating is a great time, even when the fish are not biting; if you pick the right size and kind of boat, the fun is increased.
 
Boating is a great time, even when the fish are not biting; pick the right size and kind of boat and the fun is increased.
 
 
 
Question 48

 

 
 
 
How could the author achieve credibility in this passage?
 
 
 
  
By addressing the audience using second person point of view
 
By using sources to support his/her main claims
 
By providing more details regarding the three classification of boats
 
By adding personal experiences
 
 
 
Question 49

 

 
 
 
In the paragraph, which of the following sentences is a supporting detail?
 
 
 
  
The next choice one might consider is an inland boat.
 
Finally, the last category is the deep-sea boat class.
 
There are basically three different types of boats, which can be somewhat overwhelming to a potential first time boat buyer.
 
In most applications, a deep-sea boat can carry more passengers and cargo than the smaller inland variations, making it the ultimate camper or getaway.
 
 
 
 

 
 
 
The author mentions three features of “the perfect football experience” (competition, fans, and setting). Which of the following points does not clearly belong to one of these features?
 
 
 
  
The big, blaring lights draw attention to the activity on the field, even in the dark of night.                             
 
These eager and zealous fans show their support through screams, standing, shouting, jumping up and down, and blowing horns. 
 
The competition between the two football teams brings everyone to the stadium for the game.
 
Warm hot chocolate, hot dogs, and nachos add to the overall football experience. 
 
 
 
Question 52

 

 
 
 
Which sentence best shows the transition in tone that takes place in this paragraph?
 
 
 
  
The competition between the two football teams brings everyone to the stadium for the game.
 
Many features combine to create the perfect football experience; these features include: the competition between the two teams, the fans, and the setting.
 
The chemistry created by the fierce athletes, driven to win, stirs up tension between the two groups of fans, who come ready to cheer on their team.
 
Warm hot chocolate, hot dogs, and nachos add to the overall football experience.
 
 
 
Question 53

 

 
 
 
Based on the reading, what would be the correct first main point and subpoints in the outline?
 
 
 
  

I. Setting
a. Crisp, fall air
 
Big, blaring lights
b. 
I. Setting
a. Big, blaring lights
b. Food at the game
 

I. Competition
a. Two teams practiced for weeks
b. Driven to win
 
I. Competition
a. At the stadium
b. Cheerleaders
 
 
 
Question 54

 

 
 
 
In the sentence “The football game setting also contributes to the perfect football experience” identify the transitional word
 
 
 
  
Also
 
Setting
 
Perfect
 
Game
 
 
 
 

 
 
 
The author’s overall purpose is to________.
 
 
 
  
convince readers to pursue a career in operating room housekeeping.
 
stress the importance of sanitary operating rooms.
 
demonstrate the uniqueness of an operating room housekeeper’s job.
 
make readers feel sympathetic toward operating room housekeepers.
 
 
 
Question 57

 

 
 
 
Which of the following best describes the structure or organization of the essay?
 
 
 
  
The author devotes each paragraph to specific details of an operating room housekeeper’s job.
 
The author lists in chronological order the events of an operating room housekeeper’s typical day.
 
The author arranges her supportive points from least to most important, or from weakest to strongest.
 
The author recounts her experiences from least to most memorable.
 
 
 
Question 58

 

 
 
 
Consider the following sentence from the passage “Operating Room Housekeepers.” Which word or phrase could be deleted because it is implied?


Sentence: Housekeepers face many dangers everyday while cleaning operating rooms, such as: needle sticks, broken glass, blood spills, and overhead lights in the operating rooms.
 
 
 
  
needle
 
everyday
 
glass
 
overhead
 
 
 
 

 
 
 
What information is missing from the introduction that was needed for the establishment of a strong thesis and inclusive presentation of all of the information in the essay?
 
 
 
  
The protection that marriage offers
 
The covenant contract
 
The relationship aspect of the covenant
 
The sacredness of marriage
 
 
 
Question 61

 

 
Which revision best reduces redundancy in the following sentence? 
Sentence: The odds of couples committed to covenant relations, committing adultery, divorcing or separating is not as great as those who are not committed.
 
 
 
  
The serious odds of married couples committed to covenant relations committing adultery, divorcing, or separating, is not as great as those who are not committed.
 
The odds of couples committed to married relations, committing adultery, divorcing or separating is not as high for those couples who are not committed.
 
Committed couples are less likely to entertain adultery and/or divorce than those who are less dedicated.
 
The odds of adultery and divorce among couples committed to covenant is not as high as those who are not in covenant.
 
 
 
Question 62

 

 
 
 
The author’s overall purpose is to _____________.
 
 
 
  
Convince couples of the seriousness of marital commitment.
 
Describe what happens to couples who marry too quickly.
 
Report the current state of marriages in the United States.
 
Argue that people’s view of marriage has changed over the years.
 
 
 
 

 

 
 
 
Neither the scientist or her research assistant expect to encounter any difficulty in obtaining funds for the project.
 
 
 
  
Neither
 
or
 
to encounter
 
obtaining
 
 
 
Question 3

 

 
 
 
When we arrived in Montreal, we learned that a jazz festival had just began there.
 
 
 
  
When
 
we arrived
 
learned
 
just began
 
 
 
Question 6

 

 
 
 
Elizabeth Gaskell's nineteenth-century novel North and South draws
an extended contrast between the attractive southern countryside of Britain with the grimy factory towns in the north.
 
 
 
  
draws
 
extended
 
with
 
in
 
 
 
Question 7

 

 
 
 
Because the bamboo plant on which the panda feeds is now scarce, naturalists are worried about theirchances of survival.
 
 
 
  
on which
 
is now scarce
 
about
 
their
 
 
 
Question 8

 

 
 
 
After hearing Smith's surprising report, Detective Meng began to inspect
that the witness had been lying.
 
 
 
  
After hearing
 
surprising
 
inspect
 
had been lying
 
 
 
Question 9

 Question 4

 

 
 
 
Because Maria had ran so fast during the first part of the race, she was beginning to tire by the time she reached the steep grade in the middle of the course. 
 
 
 
  
had ran 
 
so fast 
 
to tire 
 
by the time    
 
 
 
Question 5

 

 
 
 
When the leaders of the American Revolution sought foreign help, they logically
turned to France and Spain, and both countries responded favorable.
 
 
 
  
When
 
logically
 
turned to
 
favorable
 
 
 
 

 
 
 
Among the nonfictional works of James Baldwin are two volumes of essays that explore the relationship between black intellectuals with
society.
 
 
 
  
Among
 
are
 
explore
 
with
 
 
 
Question 10

 

 
 
 
Like an iceberg, the Portuguese man-of-war conceals its most longest and most dangerous partsbeneath the surface of the sea.
 
 
 
  
Like an iceberg
 
its
 
most longest
 
beneath
 
 
 
Question 11

 

 
 
 
Shoppers hunting for low prices will be able to find them at this sale; however, he or she should do some comparison shopping first in order to
recognize the true bargains.
 
 
 
  
hunting for
 
he or she
 
first
 
in order to
 
 
 
Question 14

 

 
 
 
Select the best wording of the underlined part of the sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose answer A.
 
Because of the water shortage, the governor encouraged consumers to conserve the available supply.
 
 
 
  
Because of the water shortage, the
 
Due to having a water shortage, the
 
Because of the water shortage was why the
 
Due to the water shortage which was why the
 
 
 
Question 15

 

 
 
 
Select the best wording of the underlined part of the sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose answer A.
 
Culture consists of all learned information and it is transmitted by generation to generation.
 
 
 
  
and it is transmitted by
 
that is transmitted from
 
being transmitted by
 
that they have transmitted from
 
 
 
Question 16

 Question 12

 

 
 
 
Questions 13-18. Select the best version of the underlined part of the sentence. Choice (A) is the same as the original sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose answer (A).


Answer True or False: I have read the above instructions.
 
 
 
  
True
 
False
 
 
 
Question 13

 

 
 
 
Select the best wording of the underlined part of the sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose answer A. 
 
Martina Arroya, like Leontyne Price, are celebrated for opera singing.
 
 
 
  
are celebrated for opera singing
 
is a celebrated opera singer
 
is a celebrated singer for doing opera
 
are opera singers and celebrated for doing so
 
 
 
 

 
 
 
Select the best wording of the underlined part of the sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose answer A.
 
As students who commute to campus, we feel that you should be excused from class when the weather makes it hazardous for us to drive.
 
 
 
  
you should be excused
 
we should be excused
 
those should be excused
 
they should excuse us
 
 
 
Question 17

 

 
 
 
Select the best wording of the underlined part of the sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose answer A.
 
If he would know
about the seminar, Rafael would not have called the meeting of the Hispanic Students' Union for the same evening.
 
 
 
  
If he would know
 
Not knowing
 
Inasmuch as he did not know
 
If he had known
 
 
 
Question 18

 

 
 
 
Select the best wording of the underlined part of the sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose answer A.
 
The polarization of the Earth is not fixed; in fact, the north and south magnetic poles which have exchanged positions five times over the last two million years.
 
 
 
  
poles which have exchanged positions
 
poles have exchanged positions
 
poles, exchanging positions
 
poles, their positions exchanged
 
 
 
 

 
 
 
Which of these terms or ideas do you NOT need to understand ahead of time to be able to comprehend the meaning of this passage?
 
 
 
  
Government intervention
 
Supply and demand
 
Free market economics
 
Force and fraud
 
 
 
Question 21

 

 
 
 
Which of these principles or beliefs underlies free market economic philosophy?
 
 
 
  
The belief that buyers and sellers are best equipped to decide among themselves about what is fair and equitable
 
The principle that taxation is unfair to citizens because it requires people to pay for services that are used by others
 
The principle that governments are not to be trusted to handle their citizens' economic transactions
 
The belief that all citizens should have equal rights in areas such as voting
 
 
 
Question 23

 

 
 
 
Which of these terms best describes Paul's mental state as he portrays it here?
 
 
 
  
He is dealing with a lot of unresolved anger.
 
He feels very guilty about a sin he has committed recently.
 
He feels that he is divided against himself.
 
He is upset because he has low self-esteem.
 
 
 
Question 24

 

 
 
 
Why is Paul so frustrated?
 
 
 
  
He wants to do good, but he keeps on doing evil.
 
He feels stifled by the law.
 
Following God has turned out to be very difficult for him.
 
He is dying, and he feels like a prisoner in his body.
 
 
 
 

 
 
 
What is the vantage point of the author in the passage?
 
 
 
  
On the ground
 
Standing behind a wall
 
On a rooftop above the city
 
In the barracks
 
 
 
Question 27

 

 
 
 
Which sentence best uses tone to create an appropriate and highly effective picture of the author’s attitude towards his surroundings?
 
 
 
  
They remind me of the joy provided by my salvation.
 
The hateful noise belongs to the cloaked black figures bowing in unison.
 
It is then I realize, even in the valley of the shadow of death I find peace; the hand of God has painted a magnificent sunset just for me.
 
The rocky ground just beneath the barrel of my rigid M240B machine gun is carefully scanned for explosives. 
 
 
 
Question 28

 

 
 
 
Identify the topic sentence of the paragraph:
 
 
 
  
It is then I realize, even in the valley of the shadow of death I find peace; the hand of God has painted a magnificent sunset just for me.
 
The brisk draft runs farther down my spine as I hear the eerie prayers shouted from rooftop to rooftop.
 
The foreboding city of Baghdad brings chills of fear that are only penetrated by its transcendent sunsets.
 
In the distance, beyond the menace, an exquisite array of colors pierces my doubts.
 
 
 
Question 29

 

 
Which sentence uses specific and detailed vocabulary to convey the theme?
 
 
 
  
Just beyond the rocks is the desolate road which mocks my worries by providing the enemy a valued avenue of approach.
 
The hateful noise belongs to the cloaked black figures bowing in unison.
 
Finally, my chill is warmed by an orange sun falling slowly out of sight.
 
The foreboding city of Baghdad brings chills of fear that are only penetrated by its transcendent sunsets. 
 
 
 
Question 31

 

 
 
 
In the passage, which of the following would not be a clear example of a supporting detail?
 
 
 
  
A few examples would be a court-imposed gag order: a judicial judge signs a paper to put a hush order on the media, regarding information that can compromise a case.
 
Sometimes people confuse censorship with the thought of limiting it to only a couple of types or that censorship is always valid or deserving.
 
Still another example, would be by taking the 5th Amendment, individuals can choose to remain silent because the information may only serve to incriminate them.
 
Others think it only comes through a dictatorship type of government.
 
 
 
Question 32

 

 
How could the following sentence’s redundant language be best corrected? 
Sentence: Censorship is not permission, a green light, nor an allowance of complete self-expression.
 
 
 
  
Censorship is not permission or a green light, nor an allowance of complete self-expression.
 
Censorship is not a green light, nor an allowance of complete self-expression.
 
Censorship is not permission, nor an allowance of complete self-expression.
 
Censorship is not an allowance of complete self-expression.
 
 
 
Question 33

 

 
 
 
How could the author achieve more credibility in this passage?
 
 
 
  
By addressing the audience using second person point of view
 
By using sources to support his/her main claims
 
By providing more details regarding the definition of censorship
 
By adding personal experiences
 
 
 
Question 34

 

 
 
 
Which sentence’s tone and idea strays furthest from the point’s main argument?
 
 
 
  
The word "censorship” means to silence, limit, or repress information.
 
Churches have their own laws and standards, some of which in ancient Biblical times even silenced women (1 Timothy 2: 11-14).
 
Censorship is not permission, a green light, nor an allowance of complete self-expression.
 
Rather, it is the control of information showing itself in the form of a boycott, embargo, injunction, restriction, and last but not least, ‘silence’.
 
 
 
Question 36

 

 
 
 
Which of the following details could the author have omitted because the information within the sentence is not relevant?
 
 
 
  
Because department-sized wedding shops can be intimidating, I made an appointment at a small, bridal boutique.
 
I was allowed to choose six gowns to take to the fitting room.
 
Yet, the first one I picked was similar to all the dresses I envied in the magazines.
 
All of the details are significant and should remain in the paragraph.
 
 
 
Question 37

 

 
 
 
The author chose six dresses for the fitting room, but she bought the first dress she tried on. What might the author’s purpose be in providing these details?
 
 
 
  
To explain the dress-fitting policies in bridal boutiques.
 
To prove how easy wedding dress shopping should be for all brides.
 
To describe the overwhelming task of dress shopping. 
 
To emphasize how quickly she found the perfect dress.
 
 
 
Question 38

 

 
In this excerpt from the passage, which of the following clauses are dependent:
(1)The wedding process is often trying; however, during my wedding planning, the easiest and most essential aspect was choosing my gown. (2)As soon as my husband proposed, (3)I began purchasing wedding magazines for ideas, but most importantly, I used the magazines in search of dress options. (4)I narrowed my options down to local stores, (5)which had gowns closest to my style. (6)Because department-sized wedding shops can be intimidating, (7)I made an appointment at a small, bridal boutique. (8)I was allowed to choose six gowns to take to the fitting room.
 
 
 
  
1, 2, 3, and 5
 
1, 4, and 5
 
2, 5, and 6
 
5, 6, 7 and 8
 
 
 
Question 39

 

 
 
 
From the Narrative passage, rewrite this sentence so it is using specific and detailed vocabulary. 
Sentence: In most bridal stores, the dresses are larger than the average woman’s size; therefore, I had a difficult time envisioning myself wearing most that I had chosen to try on.
 
 
 
  
Many bridal stores have designer gowns that are larger than the average woman’s size; therefore, as I tried dresses on, it was difficult to picture myself wearing many of the gowns I chose.
 
Bridal stores have a lot of dresses that are bigger than most women’s sizes and are therefore difficult to picture yourself wearing them because they are not my size.
 
It was difficult when I tried them on because they weren’t my size, but they did have a lot of dresses there.
 
Many stores sell only larger sized dresses; therefore, I had a hard time imagining what I would look like in them.
 
 
 
Question 41

 

 
 
 
In the passage, what method of organization does the author employ?
 
 
 
  
Subject by subject (discuss one subject then the other)
 
Point by point (two subjects are discussed side by side)
 
The author merely focuses on similarities
 
The author does not establish differences or similarities
 
 
 
Question 42

 

 
Which of the following sentences signals contrast within the passage?
 
 
 
  
As a single teenager and the daughter of an evangelistic minister, traveling was a way of life.
 
Now, I find myself hesitating to leave the house to acquire groceries.
 
My week usually consists of departing for church, which is situated across the street.
 
I found myself in church several days a week, ministering in each service to one degree or another.
 
 
 
Question 43

 

 
 
 
What specific verb does the author overuse within the paragraph?
 
 
 
  
Transition
 
Minister
 
Leaving
 
Spend
 
 
 
Question 44

 

 
 
 
What specific sentence and word choice best describes the author’s feelings towards her current situation?
 
 
 
  
My life after marriage is a far cry from what it was before I married.
 
In my husband’s home church I am seldom asked to minister, yet I still receive calls from time to time asking me to minister in other churches.
 
My week usually consists of departing for church, which is situated across the street.
 
I do not like traveling alone so I seldom accept many offers to minister outside my home church.
 
 
 
Question 46

 

 
 
 
Which of the following phrases serves as an effective transitional phrase?
 
 
 
  
Most stream boats require
 
The next choice
 
Most inland boats
 
In most applications
 
 
 
Question 47

 

 
 
 
What is the best way to revise this sentence to include more active voice?
Sentence: Boating is a great time, even when the fish are not biting pick the right size and kind of boat and the fun is increased.
 
 
 
  
Boating is a great time, even when the fish are not biting; pick the right size and kind of boat and the fun is increased.
 
Boating is a great time, even when the fish refuse to bite, but picking the right size and kind of boat increases the fun.
 
Boating is a great time, even when the fish are not biting; if you pick the right size and kind of boat, the fun is increased.
 
Boating is a great time, even when the fish are not biting; pick the right size and kind of boat and the fun is increased.
 
 
 
Question 48

 

 
 
 
Which one of the following sentences contains a cliché?
 
 
 
  
The intended purpose a boat will be used for should help determine the type of boat to be purchased.
 
Most stream boats require only one operator and are typically smaller making them the simplest to use.
 
So, to avoid feeling in over your head, make certain to weigh the options of the different classifications of boats.
 
There are basically three different types of boats, which can be somewhat overwhelming to a potential first time boat buyer.
 
 
 
Question 49

 

 
In the reading passage which of the following could interfere with comprehension?
 
 
 
  
The author has not described the three kinds of boats.
 
The author has used long sentences without using proper punctuation.
 
There is a grammar mistake in every sentence of the passage.
 
The passage does not have a concluding sentence.
 
 
 
Question 51

 

 
 
 
The author’s main purpose is to
 
 
 
  
convince readers to attend a football game.
 
describe the things one might see at a football game.
 
explain the elements that make a football game a unique and enjoyable event.
 
illustrate why he enjoys outdoor sporting events more than indoor sporting events.
 
 
 
Question 52

 

 
 
 
Which word(s) from the sentence below need(s) to be changed to correct an error in parallel construction?
Sentence:  “These eager and zealous fans show their support through screams, standing, shouting, jumping up and down, and blowing horns.”
 
 
 
  
Screams
 
Up and down
 
Horns
 
Eager and zealous
 
 
 
Question 53

 

 
 
 
The author mentions three features of “the perfect football experience” (competition, fans, and setting). Which of the following points does not clearly belong to one of these features?
 
 
 
  
The big, blaring lights draw attention to the activity on the field, even in the dark of night.                             
 
These eager and zealous fans show their support through screams, standing, shouting, jumping up and down, and blowing horns. 
 
The competition between the two football teams brings everyone to the stadium for the game.
 
Warm hot chocolate, hot dogs, and nachos add to the overall football experience. 
 
 
 
Question 54

 

 
 
 
What is the topic sentence of this passage?
 
 
 
  
These two opposing and talented groups come prepared for the game, having practiced for weeks.  The chemistry created by the fierce athletes, driven to win, stirs up tension between the two groups of fans, who come ready to cheer on their team.
 
The competition between the two football teams brings everyone to the stadium for the game.
 
All of these elements, the competition, the fans, and the setting, combine to create the perfect, football experience.
 
Many features combine to create the perfect football experience; these features include: the competition between the two teams, the fans, and the setting. 
 
 
 
 

 
 
 
The following sentence from the essay “Operating Room Housekeepers” is confusing. Why?

Sentence: A housekeeper is also required to wear a mask, hat, and shoe covers before entering an operating room or center core area, this is not only to protect housekeepers from a patient that may have an infection, he or she may encounter while working in surgery; this also protects the patient, and helps protect the housekeeper from many other dangers he or she will encounter while cleaning in surgery.
 
 
 
  
Enjambment
 
Wordiness
 
Cliché
 
Time order words
 
 
 
Question 57

 

 
 
 
The author’s overall purpose is to________.
 
 
 
  
convince readers to pursue a career in operating room housekeeping.
 
stress the importance of sanitary operating rooms.
 
demonstrate the uniqueness of an operating room housekeeper’s job.
 
make readers feel sympathetic toward operating room housekeepers.
 
 
 
Question 58

 

 
In the above essay, which of the following sentences would be considered a topic sentence?
 
 
 
  
Handling these types of situations properly will help the housekeeper stay safe and cleaning the rooms more enjoyable.
 
Blood spills and broken glass must be handled with caution, especially if broken glass is found with blood present.
 
The operating room housekeeper must become familiar with his or her surroundings.
 
He or she may see a housekeeper cleaning a room in a hotel, emptying trash cans in a shopping center, or using an automatic scrubber to maintain the main hallways of a hospital.
 
 
 
Question 60

 

 
Review the quote in paragraph 4. Which revision of the last sentence in paragraph 4 best transitions this quote into the essay’s developing argument?
Sentence: Couples, who are in covenant marriages, provide stability for their families and communities; it has more impact on community than anyone could ever imagine because the covenant is the cornerstone for all relationships.
 
 
 
  
Because couples, who are in covenant marriages, provide stability for their families and communities, it impacts the community as the cornerstone for all relationships.
 
As the cornerstone for all relationships, a covenant marriage is more than an upgraded social contract because when it is a holy covenant, it provides stability for families and communities.
 
A covenant marriage is important for couples, and it is the cornerstone of families and communities.
 
Couples in covenant marriage provide stability for their families and communities and is the cornerstone for all relationships.
 
 
 
Question 61

 

 
 
 
Considering the concluding paragraph, what information should have been discussed or referenced in the essay?
 
 
 
  
The specific vows for married couples
 
What a covenant is
 
Scriptures to support conclusions
 
How the sacred nature of marriage works
 
 
 
Question 62

 

 
 
 
What information is missing from the introduction that was needed for the establishment of a strong thesis and inclusive presentation of all of the information in the essay?
 
 
 
  
The protection that marriage offers
 
The covenant contract
 
The relationship aspect of the covenant
 
The sacredness of marriage
 
 
 
 

Question 2 Elizabeth Gaskell's nineteenth­century novel North and South draws an extended contrast between the attractive southern countryside of Britain with the grimy factory towns in the north.

Question 3 Both Edna and me were asked to put aside our regular work so that we could help prepare the proposal for the new client.

Question 4 As visitors enter the Museum of the Plains Indian, you see four large murals, painted by the Blackfoot artist Victor Pepion, that depict several aspects of the buffalo hunt.

Question 8 According to the article, more money is spent in the Unites States each year on health care then onnational defense.

Question 9 When the traffic light was installed at the intersection of Broad Street and Washington Avenue, the flow of rush­hour traffic improves noticeably.

Question 10 Inez and Dave plan to apply for part­time jobs, but, although they both are full­time students, Inez wants to work longer hours than him.

Question 11 Shoppers hunting for low prices will be able to find them at this sale; however, he or she should do some comparison shopping first in order to recognize the true bargains.

 

Question 5 Like a distance runner, the Dodge Challenger saves its most quickest and most impressive acceleration for the open road.

Question 6 After hearing Smith's surprising report, Detective Meng began to inspect that the witness had been lying.

Question 7 If the forest fire that broke out yesterday is not brought under control shortly, an entire villagewould have to be evacuated.

 

Question 12 Questions 13­18. Select the best version of the underlined part of the sentence. Choice (A) is the same as the original sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose answer (A). Answer True or False: I have read the above instructions.

Question 13 Select the best wording of the underlined part of the sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose answer A. If he would know about the seminar, Rafael would not have called the meeting of the Hispanic Students' Union for the same evening.

Question 16 Select the best wording of the underlined part of the sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose answer A. Because they were confined to the cramped cockpit of the small experimental plane and the two pilots found the long flight extremely uncomfortable.

Question 17 Select the best wording of the underlined part of the sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose answer A. Unfortunately, the already hard­pressed farmers were plagued once again by spring flooding,midsummer drought, and early frost.

Question 18 Select the best wording of the underlined part of the sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose answer A. Which of the two athletes is the better runner is difficult to say; both have abundant speed, energy, and endurance.

 

Question 14 Select the best wording of the underlined part of the sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose answer A. Her first novel destroyed her quiet life, and the reason was she impressed the critics, the public was captivated, and she became a celebrity overnight.

Question 15 Select the best wording of the underlined part of the sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose answer A. It is easy to learn to use the personal computer, and it has replaced the typewriter in most homes and offices.

 

 

Question 20 Which of these principles or beliefs underlies free market economic philosophy?

Question 21 In a free market economy, which of the protections would the government NOT offer?

 

Question 23 Which of these terms best describes Paul's mental state as he portrays it here?

Question 24 What is the solution Paul gives in this passage to the problem he discusses?

 

Question 26 What contrast does the author make to describe his epiphany at the end?

Question 27 What type of spatial order is used in the passage?

Question 28 The author’s use of imagery appeals to all but which of the senses?

Question 29 The author describes several things, but his overall purpose is to describe

 

Question 31 Which of the following sentences best defines “censorship” in connotative terms?

Question 32 Which sentence employs a cliché as part of the argument?

Question 33 Which of the following sentences presents the denotative meaning of the word “censorship”?

Question 34 What specific word serves as the primary focus for the paragraph?

 

Question 36 The author chose six dresses for the fitting room, but she bought the first dress she tried on. What might the author’s purpose be in providing these details?

Question 37 Which of the following is most likely the author’s audience in this paragraph?

Question 38 What is the point of view and voice of this paragraph?

Question 39 This is a ______________ paragraph.

 

Question 41 Which of the sentences below signals an abrupt change in the mode of writing?

Question 42 In the passage, which of the following does the author mostly utilize to compare?

Question 43 What specific sentence and word choice best describes the author’s feelings towards her current situation?

Question 44 In the passage, which of the following sentences contains a cliché and possible exaggeration?

 

Question 46 Which phrase least effectively describes the final type of boat class?

Question 47 In the paragraph, which of the following sentences is a supporting detail?

Question 48 What could help to establish a clear audience in the passage?

Question 49 Which of the following word(s) serves as an example of specific diction?

 

Question 51 Based on the topic sentence in the passage, what are the main points?

Question 52 In the sentence “The football game setting also contributes to the perfect football experience” identify the transitional word

Question 53 Based on the reading, what would be the correct first main point and subpoints in the outline?

Question 54 Which of the following is most likely the author’s intended audience?

 

Question 56 Which of the following serves as the best revision for the second half of the sentence below? Sentence: A housekeeper needs to know how to protect themselves from these types of hazards; needles found in an operating room must be handled with care, knowing how to dispose them properly can prevent a housekeeper from getting a needle stick.

Question 57 From what errors does the opening sentence of “Operating Room Housekeepers” suffer? Sentence: When a person visits a hotel, hospital, or a shopping center, a person may encounter a housekeeper from time to time, trying to keep that particular type of facility clean.

Question 58 The following sentence suffers from poor word choice, among other general confusions. Choose the revised sentence which uses the most accurate language while communicating a focused idea. Sentence: Knowing where the overhead lights and monitors are in an operating room can be the difference, preventing a housekeeper from getting injured on the job and cleaning the room properly.

 

Question 60 What information is missing from the introduction that was needed for the establishment of a strong thesis and inclusive presentation of all of the information in the essay?

Question 61 The following sentence suffers from what major diction and style problems? Sentence: Couples, who are in covenant marriages, provide stability for their families and communities; it has more impact on community than anyone could ever imagine because the covenant is the cornerstone for all relationships.

Question 62 Review the quote in paragraph 4. Which revision of the last sentence in paragraph 4 best transitions this quote into the essay’s developing argument? Sentence: Couples, who are in covenant marriages, provide stability for their families and communities; it has more impact on community than anyone could ever imagine because the covenant is the cornerstone for all relationships.

 

 

Question 2 Shoppers hunting for low prices will be able to find them at this sale; however, he or she should do some comparison shopping first in order to recognize the true bargains.

Question 3 Neither the scientist or her research assistant expect to encounter any difficulty in obtaining funds for the project.

Question 7 According to the article, more money is spent in the Unites States each year on health care then onnational defense.

Question 8 The validity of the results of any survey depend, in part, on the care with which the sample is chosen.

Question 9 Chief among the recommendations of the committee are that the students be encouraged toparticipate in Black History Month by attending the special programs sponsored by the school.

Question 10 Both Edna and me were asked to put aside our regular work so that we could help prepare the proposal for the new client.

 

Question 4 Like an iceberg, the Portuguese man­of­war conceals its most longest and most dangerous partsbeneath the surface of the sea.

Question 5 Because the public­address system was not working proper, only the people who were sitting in the front of the auditorium could hear the speaker clearly.

Question 6 Like a distance runner, the Dodge Challenger saves its most quickest and most impressive acceleration for the open road.

 

Question 11 As visitors enter the Museum of the Plains Indian, you see four large murals, painted by the Blackfoot artist Victor Pepion, that depict several aspects of the buffalo hunt.

Question 12 Questions 13­18. Select the best version of the underlined part of the sentence. Choice (A) is the same as the original sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose answer (A). Answer True or False: I have read the above instructions.

Question 16 Select the best wording of the underlined part of the sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose answer A. Her first novel destroyed her quiet life, and the reason was she impressed the critics, the public was captivated, and she became a celebrity overnight.

Question 17 Select the best wording of the underlined part of the sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose answer A. If he would know about the seminar, Rafael would not have called the meeting of the Hispanic Students' Union for the same evening.

Question 18 Select the best wording of the underlined part of the sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose answer A. A failure as an administrator, the general made irrational decisions, he exceeded his authority, and alienating many of the best members of the staff.

 

Question 13 Select the best wording of the underlined part of the sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose answer A. Which of the two athletes is the better runner is difficult to say; both have abundant speed, energy, and endurance.

Question 14 Select the best wording of the underlined part of the sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose answer A. The room, which has been painted white, and it still looks small and gloomy.

Question 15 Select the best wording of the underlined part of the sentence. If you think the original sentence is best, choose answer A. Culture consists of all learned information and it is transmitted by generation to generation.

 

 

Question 20 In a free market economy, which of the protections would the government NOT offer?

Question 21 What would you say is the purpose of this passage?

 

Question 23 What is the solution Paul gives in this passage to the problem he discusses?

Question 24 In this passage, does Paul, the author of Romans, describe the law as good?

 

Question 26 Which sentence uses specific and detailed vocabulary to convey the theme?

Question 27 What type of spatial order is used in the passage?

Question 28 In which of the following sentences or phrases does the author use personification to describe his threatening surroundings?

Question 29 Identify the topic sentence of the paragraph:

 

Question 31 What mode of writing is primarily used in this passage?

Question 32 Which sentence‘s language fails to narrow this author’s argument towards a particular audience?

Question 33 Which sentence’s tone and idea strays furthest from the point’s main argument?

Question 34 How could the following sentence’s redundant language be best corrected? Sentence: Censorship is not permission, a green light, nor an allowance of complete self­expression.

 

Question 24

Why is Paul so frustrated?

Question 26

What type of spatial order is used in the passage?

Question 27

Identify the topic sentence of the paragraph:

Question 28

The vivid language in this passage makes it fit into which mode of writing?

 

Question 20

Which of these principles or beliefs underlies free market economic philosophy?

Question 21

What would you say is the purpose of this passage?

Question 23

In this passage, does Paul, the author of Romans, describe the law as good?

 

Question 29

Identify the transitional words that show the spatial order:

Question 31

How could the author achieve more credibility in this passage?

Question 32

Which sentence’s tone and idea strays furthest from the point’s main argument?

Question 37

What is the point of view and voice of this paragraph?

Question 38

Which of the following details could the author have omitted because the information within the sentence is not relevant?

 

Question 33

In the passage, which of the following would be considered the topic sentence?

Question 34

In the passage, which of the following would not be a clear example of a supporting detail?

Question 36

From the Narrative passage, rewrite this sentence so it is using specific and detailed

vocabulary. Sentence: In most bridal stores, the dresses are larger than the average woman’s size; therefore, I had a difficult time envisioning myself wearing most that I had chosen to try on.

 

Question 39

Which of the following details might the author have added to strengthen the story?

Question 41

What would be considered the main idea of this passage?

Question 42

What type of paragraph is this?

Question 47

The topic sentence of the above passage, “There are basically three different types of boats, which can be somewhat overwhelming to a potential first time boat buyer,” could be improved by:

Question 48 

Which mode of writing is used in this passage?

Question 49

In the paragraph, which of the following sentences is a supporting detail?

 

Question 43

In the passage, which of the following does the author mostly utilize to compare?

Question 44

In this passage, which sentence reinforces the topic sentence and signals conclusion?

Question 46

Which phrase least effectively describes the final type of boat class?

 

Question 51

Which sentence best shows the transition in tone that takes place in this paragraph?

Question 52

In the sentence “The football game setting also contributes to the perfect football experience” identify the transitional word

Question 57

Which of the following is the best revision of this sentence?

Sentence: Housekeepers must wear a surgery blues uniform before entering the surgery area, no street clothes or any other housekeeping uniform is allowed in the surgery; this is to help prevent the spread of infections in the surgery area.

Question 58

In the last paragraph of the essay, which is a better revision of the last sentence?

Sentence: Knowing what to do can help a housekeeper clean more efficiently and avoid any serious injuries while working in one of the most unique environments a housekeeper can work in.

Question 60

The author’s overall purpose is to _____________.

 

Question 53

Which of the following is most likely the author’s intended audience?

Question 54

The author’s main purpose is to

Question 56

From what errors does the opening sentence of “Operating Room Housekeepers” suffer?

Sentence: When a person visits a hotel, hospital, or a shopping center, a person may encounter a housekeeper from time to time, trying to keep that particular type of facility clean.

 

Question 61

Which sentence is a better transition for the beginning of paragraph 4?